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'From One of Evil Will'

October 26, 2008
By Anonymous

From one of evil will
A river of black, demented, demeanor flows,
pouring into cascades of ill-boding
that attacks each and all within it's grasp.

The author's comments:
I wrote this one night when I was thinking about duality, evil in particular. At first, I was guna leave it at ill-boding. (ominity doesn't appear to be a word, so ill-boding was it's replacement...)

However, I decided that while I wanted it a bit loose ended, that was a bit much. So, I wrote the next line to describe the ill-boding and it's target. Hopefully you all got an idea of what I was trying to talk about. Thanks for reading. =)

-Shane

P.S. This was my first attempt at a submission, so if it was published, then WOO!
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