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Sunset

August 29, 2008
By MadisonC. SILVER, Montgomery Village, Maryland
MadisonC. SILVER, Montgomery Village, Maryland
6 articles 7 photos 2 comments

Sitting there on the sand watching the Sunset,
of two Suns,
in the water.

Dolphins jump over the horizon, and seagulls fly overhead.

The Sun colors the clouds Orange and Pink.

I Watch and Wonder how Mother Nature does it...

It's like a Beautiful Painting that you can't take your eyes off.

I watch the world catch Fire as the Sun gives it an orange glow.

The author's comments:
I have been writing poetry since the fourth grade when i discovered that poetry existed. I immediately fell in love with writing. My poems started out being childish and foolish, to where they are now. Poetry is not something that I think about when I write. I don't control the poem. The poem controls me. I just follow it's heartbeat. Poetry is my passion. I love it. I hope you love it, too.

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on Jul. 31 2009 at 4:38 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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wow, i do love your poem. good descriptions but i think you maybe could've gone farther with this idea and make it more original and creative. however, the beauty is evident and it's great nonetheless (:

on Jan. 28 2009 at 4:53 pm
It WAS GOOD...jennier<3

Platypus67 said...
on Sep. 26 2008 at 12:06 am
Hey hey, i like it, its purty :) -ashley barney

banntay said...
on Sep. 18 2008 at 2:40 am
I could visualize this poem and can see that this young woman has the ability to 'write a picture'.