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Hatred for the Manufactured

February 13, 2013
By Soliloquist PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
Soliloquist PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
44 articles 22 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you try to please everyone you will please no one, except thoughs who are pleased by failure."


Looking through this dirty windshield
Admiring what all nature did build
And slowly I grew hate
For what was made by the smartest primate
We made the world into a box
And tried to stay safe with plastic locks
So I broke the windshield
And picked the locks that they tried to build
I stepped out of my square
And saw a sight quite rare
A colorful place
That wasn't painted on a blank space
But existed on the real
And change everything I thought or could feel
I felt non-manufactured wind
Wrap around my body and send
A sensation down my spine
As me and nature began to intertwine
As I made my own trail
I saw glass hanging by tree branches to frail
Off in the distance
Showing the paths pf past resistance
Is this resistance I'd come to rue
Or is this freedom so true
At the greenest patch of grass I took a break
And never from this peaceful place would I wish to wake



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on Feb. 28 2013 at 11:19 am
Soliloquist PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
44 articles 22 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you try to please everyone you will please no one, except thoughs who are pleased by failure."

Thanks, I wrote it when I was just driving down a back road.

on Feb. 28 2013 at 12:42 am
Rebel21 PLATINUM, St. Catharines, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where there is desire, there is gonna be a flame,<br /> Where there is a flame someone&#039;s bound to get burned.<br /> Just because it burns doesn&#039;t mean you&#039;re gonna die,<br /> You&#039;ve got to get up and try.

Wow this is so inspiring I love this topic I feel exactly the same:)