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Bitter Flavor

February 10, 2012
By Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

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Spiders skittering inside vulnerable souls,
weaving their cobwebs in and out of lost hearts;
their host oblivious to the gaping holes

stretching the gap into eternity that parts
Creator from created so hopelessly,
that no more can one decipher where it starts.

Revealed, we now see their true identity,
never trusting our everlasting Savior,
leaning on their twisted silk of catastrophe.

Unaware that their rebellious behavior
condemns them to live in ceaseless, tortuous death.
And spiders turn to drink their bitter flavor.

© Nicole F., New City, NY

The author's comments:
Spiders reprenting sin in this instance, they take hold of you and, in the end, consume you.
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raeee GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2012 at 7:23 pm
raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
15 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?" -Favourite poem ever♥

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this is absolutely fantastic (:
justjosie PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2012 at 7:19 pm
justjosie PLATINUM, Scottsburg, Indiana
38 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love a girl who writes,<br /> and live her many lives;<br /> you have yet to find her,<br /> beneath her words of guise.&quot;

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I agree with Tim, I enjoyed the discribtion. It was different from anything I've read before, and I liked it.
justjosie PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2012 at 7:19 pm
justjosie PLATINUM, Scottsburg, Indiana
38 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love a girl who writes,<br /> and live her many lives;<br /> you have yet to find her,<br /> beneath her words of guise.&quot;

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I agree with Tim, I enjoyed the discribtion. It was different from anything I've read before, and I liked it.
TimmyTiger GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2012 at 7:14 pm
TimmyTiger GOLD, Somewhere, Indiana
10 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s time to nut up, or shut up.&quot; - Woodey Harrelson &quot;Zombieland&quot;

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I personally loved it. Great description, great picture. You are really good. :D