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They’re Their Own Enemy

January 27, 2012
By PurplePassion16 BRONZE, Neverland, Other
PurplePassion16 BRONZE, Neverland, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Good friends are like stars. You don't always see them, but you know they're always there."


They’re
Their
Own enemy.
He’s
His
Own foe.
She’s her
Own abuser.

But…

Both
Blame
The other.
So
Stubborn
These lovers:
Won’t admit
Their faults.

If…

Only
One
Offered apology,
Then
The
Other forgave,
Each would
Own happiness.

Yet…

Alas!
Alone
Each is:
Living
Life’s
Every moment
Painfully parted
Ever more.


The author's comments:
We've been reading poems in my English class and so I wanted to write one that was short, simple, and unique in structure. I thought about writing a love poem, but I liked the idea of lovers being parted better. So this is what I came up with.

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on Feb. 21 2012 at 6:24 pm
darkKiwi BRONZE, Riverton, Illinois
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i may be small but i am very mighty

i like the feeling u put in it