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My Biggest Enemy

July 9, 2011
By jdotalways SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
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I blame all my problems
On my family
I never realized
I was my biggest enemy.

My mom was on drugs
She hurt me badly
My dad was hardly there
He never understood me

I used to cut myself
Needle knife and blade
I belonged in the background
Where I began to fade.

I hated life
No soul to bare
I went on in life
Without a single care.

God torchers me
Pushes me closer to suicide
When he passes judgment
I can't hide.

I never realized it's not anyone
No one but me
I fight a war
Me being my biggest enemy.

© Allison F., Langhorne, PA

The author's comments:
When I wrote this poem I was very depressed. I didn't care about anyone but myself. I cried and cut myself. I blamed most of my problems on my mother. I hope people will realize that they can't blame everything on other people. Most of their problems are their own fault.
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