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Our Sunset

January 25, 2011
By bookaholic SILVER, Wichita, Kansas
bookaholic SILVER, Wichita, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"A word is dead when it is said, some say. I say it just begins to live that day."-Emily Dickinson


I love to watch the sunset
Counting every stunning hue
But I sometimes start to wonder
Why I’m not watching it with you

I love to see the sunsets
At the end of every day
You aren’t here beside me
But I’ll watch it anyway

The sun’s beneath the horizon
Yet still the colors shine
This sunset’s ours forever
This sunset’s yours and mine


The author's comments:
No matter where you are, every sunset can be beautiful.

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on Feb. 13 2011 at 8:19 pm
Geckogirl BRONZE, Wichita, Kansas
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HI! I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM! IT IS QUITE DESCRIPTIVE AND EXPRESSIVE, THOUGH NOT TOO LONG. GOOD JOB!

(P.S. IS THE ALL CAPS NORMAL? 'CAUSE IT WON'T LET ME WRITE IN LOWERCASE...)