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June 25, 2010
By that_one_song SILVER, Helena, Montana
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that_one_song SILVER, Helena, Montana
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M.I.A- &quot;I don&#039;t judge my success by how high my tower is, but by how much I am able to be a part of people&#039;s lives.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;You tried to sink your soul, oh, but didn&acute;t realize, you keep it in a different hole.&quot;<br /> The Kooks, Sofa Song

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The essence of a mountain
Is like that of a fountain

The trees do flicker
As the water does whisper

The brightly swaying green
Matches the ever rippling sheen

And the early morning sparkle of mountain hue
Like the ever twisting surface of deep blue

The harsh cold mountains, as if in a story
May never be told, that frigid glory

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inspired by a hot tub ad, no joke
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Triss GOLD said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 12:05 am
Triss GOLD, Delaware, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;School is practice for the future, practice makes perfect, but nobody is perfect. So why practice?&quot;<br /> &quot;You can murder a murderer, but you can never murder murder itself.&quot;<br /> &quot;Life&#039;s not about waiting for the storm to pass but learning to dance in the rain

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awesome! :D   I find things written about nature very calming and relaxing
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:09 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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i'll comment but you owe me;)  and i thought it was well written i could picture the scene perfectly:)
that_one_song SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 7:18 pm
that_one_song SILVER, Helena, Montana
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
M.I.A- &quot;I don&#039;t judge my success by how high my tower is, but by how much I am able to be a part of people&#039;s lives.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;You tried to sink your soul, oh, but didn&acute;t realize, you keep it in a different hole.&quot;<br /> The Kooks, Sofa Song

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comments would be great :)