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A Hearts Clock

January 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)


I've been counting every hour
That I haven't seen your face
You are now the cause
Of every tear I waste

I hide it with fake laughter
A lie in every smile
Every second I wonder why
It's been such a long while

The weeks go crawling by
I long to hold you close
I'm starving for your love
And withering like a rose

It seems like forever
Yet I guess I'll wait
For I'll always want you
And that shall be my fate



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on May. 20 2010 at 10:24 pm
DanielleZ DIAMOND, Rochester Hills, Michigan
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Do what you like and like what you do.

Very strong! I like it.

on Apr. 27 2010 at 11:16 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

Thank u:)                        

on Apr. 25 2010 at 12:48 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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&quot;Just live your life, if people don&#039;t like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it&quot; &quot;if you can&#039;t stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best&quot;

Lovely Lovely Lovely

on Apr. 18 2010 at 3:40 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

thank you:)

on Apr. 18 2010 at 9:56 am
Heather Manning PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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Awesome I can relate

on Apr. 16 2010 at 6:58 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

Thanx:)                            

hellozina GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 9:53 pm
hellozina GOLD, Boise, Idaho
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&quot;If everything seems under control, you&#039;re just not going fast enough.&quot; - Mario Andretti

this is super good :) keep it up!

on Apr. 15 2010 at 11:26 am
salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

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&quot;It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees.&quot;<br /> -Che Guevara

very solid poem, a longing that few are able to capture with words

on Feb. 7 2010 at 11:59 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

thank you it means a lot to me:)

Trolllollo said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 12:08 pm
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Your welcome...keep up the good work!

Trolllollo said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 10:50 am
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Your welcome....you're better at writing poetry than me

on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:47 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

Thank you:)

Trolllollo said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:24 pm
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Great poem...it was wonderfully written