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November 20, 2009
By sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
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sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
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Love is just like a rose.
It starts out small but then it grows.
It makes you happy and makes you sad.
When it's at its highest youll be glad
but just like a rose love falls apart
youre sitting there crying with a broken heart
the rose lives but it has to die youll star at the sky and want to fly
just like a rose love is beautiful
the feeling you have is so wonderfull
but at the end a rose can break
it feels like your heart was stabbed with a stake
all in all love is much like a rose
what will happen no one knows

© Liza C., Seattle, WA

The author's comments:
i want people to know that you shouldnt get your hopes up about love. it can break and fall apart and you need to get your self back up when it does because at some point in your life, it WILL happen to you
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HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2010 at 5:01 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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lovely rhyming skillz... Good poem ^^ id only put in some punctuation so it's easier to read ;) Good job, ur a shweet writer
kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 9:14 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop.&quot;

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i love the poem and totally agree that lust and infatuation is commonly mistaken for love
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 5:21 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell

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i like the rhyme scheme and the overall subject.... i like it.
sany.lastflame PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 1:20 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 255 comments
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yeah i actually made a mistake the 7th line has to be split into two parts after the word die.
FunkiMonki BRONZE said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 11:31 pm
FunkiMonki BRONZE, Lakewood, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Shoot for the moon. If you miss, you land on the stars&quot;

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wow it was so beautiful
Iheartthearts said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 5:13 pm
Iheartthearts, Ayer, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Just living is not enough... One must have sunshine, freedom, and a little flower.&quot; - Hans Christian Andersen

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Wow, your poetry is amazing! I can defiantly feel the vibe and emotions.
christianjedi said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:54 pm
christianjedi, Roundup, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
Make no little plans. They have no magic to stir your blood.

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Nice poem. It could flow a little smoother, but I like the analogy. Love is real though; the problem is, what the world views today as love is mere infatuation. Nice work though!
Aurora said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 8:07 am
Thats what i say to! love isnt a true, lasting thing
MyriahShaleen said...
on Dec. 20 2009 at 8:43 pm
Lovely. I really like this :]