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When Love Comes Around

July 20, 2009
By vickilovesu0227 SILVER, Bellefonte, Pennsylvania
vickilovesu0227 SILVER, Bellefonte, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is giving someone the power to break your heart, but trusting them not to."


When love comes around, it doesn't leave you when you break down

When love comes around, it is there for you when you need a shoulder to cry on.

When love comes around, it doesn't break down on the side of a highway

When love comes around, it knocks you down and then it's right there to pick you up again.

When love comes around, you have to get up and brush the dirt off your shoulders.



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on Oct. 12 2009 at 10:06 am
vickilovesu0227 SILVER, Bellefonte, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is giving someone the power to break your heart, but trusting them not to."

Thanks! I don't really mean to put that much emotion in my poems, but it comes across like that, and i don't mind

on Aug. 16 2009 at 6:01 am
ayeBNFx3 SILVER, Bronx, New York
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Very Very Touching

Lonleydandy said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 12:46 am
I really like this poem!

on Aug. 4 2009 at 9:38 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

wow! this is really good, and soooooo true! you did a great job writing this, i can feel the emotion :) comment on some of my work please, i would love your opinion!