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The Ring of Sound

May 6, 2024
By 5mueller BRONZE, Delafield, Wisconsin
5mueller BRONZE, Delafield, Wisconsin
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It’s about 5:30 in the morning as she sits up in bed. 

“Sorry I fell asleep and didn’t respond.” 

She just laughed and replied “it's ok” 

As she looks at the floor she’s taken aback.

“How is he responding right now?” She said out loud.

As Jake Fredman is limp on the floor drenched. 


The author's comments:

This if for the 55 fiction post, the main idea was to make an unexpected story in only 55 words… it was challenging to figure out how to make a story with that little of words but here is my stable 


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