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A Night Out

April 26, 2024
By Anonymous

Ron and Tanya are headed on this beautiful summer night to the incredibly talented Flo Milli concert. “What a wonderful night for a concert in the beautiful city of Minneapolis.” “no traffic and easy parking is such a win for us!”. Ron says. 

 They enter the Fillmore Theater and are in the standing area of the stage. “Maybe if she crowd surfs, we will get to see her even closer,” says Tayna. The Fillmore is packed full of tourists. Ron looks over to grab a drink from the bar. “$15 for one beer?!” he exclaims. 

Tayna stared at him in cheap disbelief. The concert is about to start and everyone is getting rowdy. All of a sudden Flo Milli enters the stage and her backup dancers are the first things that catch the eye. 

“What an entrance,” Tayna says. 

The largest rumble shakes the building turning everyone's heads wondering where and what is causing it. Someone from the crowd yells “I think it's an earthquake”. Some people are completely disregarding the ground shaking and think it's a part of the show. At this point, The Fillmore is doing its best to continue with the concert.

 “I'm so ready for her to play in the party, that's my favorite song,” says Ron.

 “I think that Beef is the best song” Tanya responds. 

The concert has officially started and With his drink in hand, Ron is having the best experience of his life. Boom, the ground is quietly shaking underneath, People are so confused as they don’t know if it is part of the concert or not. Once again, the concert resumes. 

“Who and what is that figure over there?” Ron asked Tanya. 

This man in an all-black suit with his hood on looks like he is up to no good. Tayna says she saw him earlier looking suspicious and did not have a good gut feeling about him. All of a sudden he drops his drink and starts grabbing a lady's purse screaming at her, and asking for all of her money. Flo Milli jumps off the stage mid-song as she sees this conflicted situation between this lady and a suspicious guy. People swarm the scene, and Ron takes charge. He starts punching the guy in the face and calling him horrible names. The guy begging for mercy. He surrenders the purse. 

Flo Milli herself asks him what his problem is. He responded with “She was an easy target, I thought now was a good time because everyone will be focused on you.

”You have horrible morals,” says Flo Milli. Security guards escort the man to Dingdong County Jail. Flo Milli returns to the stage and finally, the concert resumes. Tayna and Ron are having the best time of their lives. Ron looks around and all eyes are toward the front of the stage, right where they are standing. Ron does a double take, waiting for the perfect time. He reaches into his pocket and gets down on one knee. Tayna looked as confused as ever. So much is happening as they are at the center of the concert and Ron is down on one knee.

“what are you doing?” Tayna asks. “You are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen, life is too short to half love someone, I love you more than words could ever describe. Will you marry me Tayna?” Flo Milli saw this happen from the stage. She stops the show. The Fillmore is silent. 

“YES,” Tayna exclaims. 

Flo Milli starts her newest song, Yeah Glo. Everyone is excited for Ron and Tayna's future.


The author's comments:

This short story is about some friends at a concert


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