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You Are Me

June 30, 2009
By brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
the only thing you have to do in life is die<br /> music makes everything better


Lay your head on my chest,
Dry your eyes you did your best,
When you cry tears come falling from my eyes,
When you talk I speak
When your pale ,I'm weak

Lay your head on my chest,
Stop the tears and just rest
When you turn blue , I can't breath
When your upset I'm mad
When your happy I'm glad

Lay your head on my chest
This isn't a crying test
When you look I see
when you look at me I see you are me.


The author's comments:
This was a really odd poem I wrote it is very weird

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on Jun. 16 2010 at 8:13 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

GREAT JOB!!! awesome!!! i love this!!! pleas check out some of my work!! i think you would like it

on Jul. 11 2009 at 4:35 pm
xXFadedFlowerXx GOLD, Roy, Utah
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Great poem, it really says a lot in just a few lines.

on Jul. 9 2009 at 3:14 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

This was amazing. You are a fantastic poet. I like how you compare you to this other person and then give the conclusion at the last sentence. PERFECT JOB. Check out my poem called "I am Here"