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Crystal Brawl

May 12, 2023
By Just_JJ_15 SILVER, San Pedro, California
Just_JJ_15 SILVER, San Pedro, California
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Welcome to Whimsical Cove! How may I help you?


I don’t want your help, I want a refund!
There are no refunds.


No refunds? I am going to put this on Yelp!


What! What do you mean?


GIVE ME MY MONEY BACK!
DON’T PUT YOUR REVIEW ON YELP!


Let’s compromise. 


I helped you see into your future. What’s wrong with that?


You're a fake! The opposite is happening!
I’m not a fake! 


Yes you are!
Your girlfriend was supposed to love you forever and that didn’t happen!
TALK OVER EACH OTHER
My girlfriend was supposed to love me forever and that didn’t happen!


YOU'RE A LIAR!
I’m trying to make a living here!


I don’t care.


What’s wrong with you?!


Get out of my shop!

 


I’m staying right here.
STOP!

 


Who’s at the door?


Welcome to Whimsical Cove! How may I help you?


The author's comments:

This is a 2 voice poem made in creative writing class. I love this piece so much because it was out of my comfort zone and I was able to challenge myself.


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