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Almost Like Déjà Vu

June 6, 2009
By ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac


I always used to dream about a world with someone who loved me

Loved me as I am, flaws and all.

Dreamt about a world with someone who would be willing to stay

Up with me for hours talking and listening to what I had to say.

Dreamt about a world with someone who would never be scared

To hold me in his arms when I am scared, confused, upset, or angry.

To kiss me and tell me everything is going to be ok.

To give me advice whenever I am stuck or troubled.

Dreamt about a world with someone who would treat me with

The utmost respect. Respecting my feelings, my spirit, and my body.

Dreamt about a world with someone who made me feel like a

Princess. A world with someone who understands me and make

Me understand myself.

I dreamt of that world and it came true.

Almost like déjà vu.



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on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:01 pm
sillyaardvarkabc BRONZE, Riverside, Connecticut
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I love this-- it almost seems impossible that a person could be that perfect. However, I think you should try to write more short stories! Your poems are great don't get me wrong, but I think you should try different mediums of writing. Great work!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:20 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we&#039;re going.&quot; Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls<br /> &quot;The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound.&quot; Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

loved the rhythm and the sometimes rhyme. i absolutely agree with despurlock.

on Jan. 7 2010 at 2:02 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The heart has its reasons which reason does not know.&quot; -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

Beautiful! I love it :) And I find this so so so sooooooooo relatable! Again, another 5 stars and a fave! I'm gonna work on readin all your poems because I love them!

tbkeleli said...
on Dec. 26 2009 at 8:12 pm
awww this is a sweet poem. great work. i like how you compared it to deja vu.

on Jun. 24 2009 at 1:02 pm
write4life_0912 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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Dnt we all wish! this is great1 I♥it!