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Pain Without You!

May 18, 2009
By Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
15 articles 9 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hello Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o,&quot; -friends<br /> &quot;Stop saying that!! My name ain&#039;t Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o!!&quot; -Me<br /> &quot;Okay, fine, Hello Cat.&quot;-friends<br /> (GRRRRR)<br /> ----Also----<br /> &quot;You a turtle on steroids!&quot;-friends<br /> &quot;Hahaha, I know&quot; -ME


My heart is full of sorrow,
My soul engulfed in pain.
My lungs fill with water,
Ever since that sad, sad day,
You left,
I cried,
Can’t believe you left my side,
What will I do?
Without you,
To hold me in these times,
Please come back,
I miss you much,
Help me now,
Let’s do lunch,
Just come back,
We’ll go from there,
Please help dad,
I love you,
I swear.

The author's comments:
This is not what happen in real life. I just like to write different sorts of poetry

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AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:10 pm
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 606 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don&#039;t have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I&#039;ve never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you&#039;re also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking.&quot; &mdash; Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy&#039;s Gate)

Holy.... wow.... umm.... just WOW.  This really was amazing!  It was so well written I could FEEL her pain!  Wow!!!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 9:59 pm
Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
15 articles 9 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hello Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o,&quot; -friends<br /> &quot;Stop saying that!! My name ain&#039;t Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o!!&quot; -Me<br /> &quot;Okay, fine, Hello Cat.&quot;-friends<br /> (GRRRRR)<br /> ----Also----<br /> &quot;You a turtle on steroids!&quot;-friends<br /> &quot;Hahaha, I know&quot; -ME

I love doing this! It is so fun and i love to write! thanks for the posts ppl!

on Sep. 5 2009 at 10:21 pm
AbbieLeigh GOLD, Keosauqua, Iowa
13 articles 7 photos 25 comments
I loveeeee it!!!!

on Jun. 16 2009 at 6:21 pm
<3 it!