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11:11 Memories

May 11, 2009
By KassidyLeigh GOLD, Brewer, Maine
KassidyLeigh GOLD, Brewer, Maine
11 articles 4 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are a millions guys who will try to pick you up but only one can sweep you off your feet!" -Emily Illingworth


At 11:11 everyday, a.m. or p.m., I make a wish. Before you left me, weak hopeless wrapped up in my own darkened memories,
I would make a wish about us and our love. I would wish that you would hold me forever, sweetly, gently, with a passion
anda type of romance never experienced by myself before. I would wish that the words forever would become an
understatement in our minds and forever we would stay, hand in hand, mouth kissing mouth, and heart warming heart.
The day that they told me you planned on leaving our fairy tale, I cried until it was a dry stream. I told you I loved
you; you did not care. I told you I'd change; you did not care. I had given myself to you to hold, but you turned me away.
Everything we had was shattered. I sat, simply wrapped in tears after I told you that I couldn't put up with anymore.
The second I hung up, I regretted everything. No one could comfort the raged, torn spirit that had taken over me. Since
then, I have not let anyone in. My feelings, I keep them inside again, just like before you came around. Now, everyday
at 11:11, I wish that somehow, I will be able to get over you. I wish that I can foget all those wasted wishes and find
another person to love. But for some reason, every day at 11:11, a.m. or p.m., I want to cry...


The author's comments:
I wrote this recently, after the break up of me and my first serious boyfriend. I worte this after reading a quote about wated 11:11 wishes, and I realized exacly how many times I really made 11:11 wishes about this boy. Now that I'm starting to get over him, I felt that I coulf publish this piece

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on Aug. 11 2009 at 9:09 pm
edubois4 BRONZE, Port Neches, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
All great adventures require some risks.

This poem is the truest one I've seen on here. Way to go.

on Jul. 31 2009 at 9:28 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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that was so raw and emotional. i loved it and i can totally feel your pain. i hope you feel better soon :)

on May. 21 2009 at 12:11 am
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

I really like it! lots of description and stuff. It's so sad. I am sorry for the loss of him. He must have been wonderful... By the way: Thanks for the comment on my poem...

Kim Giggey said...
on May. 18 2009 at 11:38 pm
Kim Giggey, Brewer, Maine
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It's so beautiful; it moves me to tears...

on May. 18 2009 at 9:23 pm
LittlestBird GOLD, North Bay, Other
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Awe. Breakups are tough. Way to have the courage to publish this, you're a great writer!

on May. 17 2009 at 6:52 pm
KassidyLeigh GOLD, Brewer, Maine
11 articles 4 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are a millions guys who will try to pick you up but only one can sweep you off your feet!" -Emily Illingworth

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