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April 20, 2009
By KrissyKeindl GOLD, Inver Grove Heights, Minnesota
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he holds me when i start to cry
makes me smile with just his eyes
he shares my hopes, dreams, fears
he wipes away my tears
and i love him without regret...
to bad i haven't found him yet!

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

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romance_lover GOLD said...
on Dec. 5 2009 at 11:11 pm
romance_lover GOLD, Edmonton, Other
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oh this is just awesome lol you should be proud you wrote ti... its absolutely hilarious yet truley relevant :D Good Work!
Inkspired PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 30 2009 at 8:43 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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I love this, I didn't expect the last line either. Of course, it's so true. LOVE IT!
IRBFGW DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 30 2009 at 11:40 am
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hey, assbutt!&quot; Supernatural, Castiel.

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this is nice, i see the message you are trying to send to the reader. its very clever, especially the last line. nice job!
Dandelion PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 11:24 pm
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
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I like it. :)



May I ask how you all made your user settings? I've been trying forever, but there's no "My Settings" button on my computer.
jennnnnnn BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 12:57 am
jennnnnnn BRONZE, Irvine, California
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ahahaha wow i love the last line, definitely wasn't expecting that. this is cute (: feel free to check out my poems ! thanks
KICK3593 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 10:13 pm
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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You can't joke in verse, and especially in fields such as love.
DinosoarJen DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 8:44 pm
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.<br /> It&#039;s sad but true.<br /> And even dead I&#039;m still ahead<br /> of most of you.

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Cute!