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For You

April 9, 2009
By Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.

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Without your voice
I don't know where I'd be
I thank you for the memories
I know I'm like a puzzle
Always needing new help
Your my life
Always giving
New suprises and wonders

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EmC725 SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 4:05 pm
EmC725 SILVER, Western Springs, Illinois
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"The most wasted of all days is one without laughter." -e.e. cummings

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I like your message! Personally, I would like to see the third line move to the end of the poem; I think it would make more sense and would add more power. Good job.
Shannon_ GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 7:48 am
Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
12 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.

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true... thanks lol
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:44 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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I liked this. Good job :)

One minor thing I want to point out: In the line that says "Your my life," It's "YOU'RE my life."