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Stardust

October 5, 2011
By DreamingOurWorld GOLD, Irvine, California
DreamingOurWorld GOLD, Irvine, California
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Summary:

All Elyon has ever known is the life of a slave, working on the plantations, and taking care of Matte, his brother. But now, the stargazers on Mount Pyle have recruited him to be one of them. How is he supposed to learn about stargazing when all he knows is how to farm?


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imagonner said...
on May. 19 2016 at 11:15 am
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
' its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.' don't forget who you are to me.

this is very well written! if you would like some advice id say, that you shouldn't rush things so much. an average novel is 64,000 words long. around 2000 words for the average chapter in a novel. unless, this is a novella than it is great.

on Oct. 13 2011 at 8:45 pm
DreamingOurWorld GOLD, Irvine, California
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Mom...please change your name...

guesswho said...
on Oct. 13 2011 at 3:15 pm
Great story again!!! Wonderful ending...