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YellowJacket

May 16, 2011
By Delta365 BRONZE, Chadwick, Missouri
Delta365 BRONZE, Chadwick, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Summary:

A man who happens to deal with a bit of anger. Anger is only evident if provoked as such.

He ends up going through a tragic experience, and goes a bit mad afterwards and takes out his revenge.

Ends up like most tragic stories.


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on Jul. 29 2011 at 8:22 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

So sad! Especially how they brainwash him into fighting on their side. I mean, they killed his future wife! I love it, though. You have a lot of talent and creativity! Keep it up!

on Jun. 22 2011 at 7:03 pm
Brayaparis BRONZE, Amboy, Washington
3 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured my the breaths we take but, by the moments that take our breath away.

wow, you really have talent(:
I am trying to find the coarge to put my stuff up. Reading yours inspired me thanks!

on May. 30 2011 at 4:06 pm
leaf44 PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
20 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Truth is stranger than fiction because fiction has to make sense.&quot;<br /> &quot;Be careful, or you&#039;ll end up in my novel.&quot;

No, I like the ending.  It's kinda sad, but it's good.

on May. 27 2011 at 4:49 pm
Delta365 BRONZE, Chadwick, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 10 comments
ya, that'd probably help. Think i should add more to the end?

on May. 19 2011 at 3:07 pm
leaf44 PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
20 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Truth is stranger than fiction because fiction has to make sense.&quot;<br /> &quot;Be careful, or you&#039;ll end up in my novel.&quot;

That was great!  Really interesting and fast paced, although it was a little confusing at times.  You might want to add a little more about his fiance too.