Rose of Thorns | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Novel (Fiction)
  3. Sci-fi/Fantasy
  4. Rose of Thorns

Rose of Thorns

April 12, 2011
By DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
More by this author
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

View profile

Summary:

Rose Kelledy couldn't be more surprised, or upset, when she receives a letter from the local Vampire Academy, White Rose- informing her that a vampiric prophet has Seen her, as a vampire. Now Rose is officially a Promise, one of the rare humans who is already, and always was, destined to become immortal. Only one problem, Rose may not exactly know what she wanted to do with her life- but becoming a vampire was certainly not a part of her plan. Especially not since her best friend's brother was taken in much the same way.

Not matter what Rose does though, she will have to go to White Rose someday, the vampires wont allow her to remain a threat to the human population for long.

But as it turns out, White Rose isn't really what Rose expected.

Rose isn't really what she expects anymore either... she can tell she's changing, but she hasn't even been bitten yet. Even the vampires don't know what Rose is- but they do know that she will be important. Already the powerful players of the vampiric world have their eyes on Rose. But Rose isn't willing to be another chess piece in their centuries old game of power.

Tags: Love/relationships

Read this book
Previous book
Next book

Rhiannin B.

Rose of Thorns

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar books

Previous Next
Novels
The Envelope
By TheCylceGoesRound PLATINUM
Raleigh, North Carolina
TheCylceGoesRound PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
24 articles 2 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the rich wage war it's the poor who die.

View profile
Novels
The Unknown
By J.A.Stryker
Shelbyville, Michigan
J.A.Stryker, Shelbyville, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Novels
Angel-The First in the Angel Trilogy
By skyblue95 PLATINUM
Bear, Delaware
skyblue95 PLATINUM, Bear, Delaware
35 articles 1 photo 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am paraphrasing, of course. "My only fear is that when they are turned to loving they will find we are turned to hating." -Reverand Msimangu, Cry, The Beloved Country (a book by Alan Paton)

View profile
Novels
elvest
By elvestsmaster
Starke, Florida
elvestsmaster, Starke, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Novels
Unique (Part 1: The Beginning)
By Silvertext BRONZE
West Lafayette, Indiana
Silvertext BRONZE, West Lafayette, Indiana
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination has rules, but we can only guess what they are." ~Mason Cooley

View profile
Novels
misfortune twins
By Angelnight16 BRONZE
Heuvelton, New York
Angelnight16 BRONZE, Heuvelton, New York
1 article 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i used to be normal... until i met those people who i now call my friends."

View profile
Novels
Kapre Fever
By SerenaGelb BRONZE
Danville, California
SerenaGelb BRONZE, Danville, California
4 articles 1 photo 1 comment
View profile
Novels
The Mark
By HidingBoy SILVER
Hartsdale, New York
HidingBoy SILVER, Hartsdale, New York
9 articles 11 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
The lord is near to all who call on him, to all who call on him in truth. -Ashrei

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This book has 33 comments.

DaylightDarkness SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:11 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

View profile
Thanks! Actually the exciting news on this particular story is that I'm looking into professional publication. So I'll be sure to let everyone know when/if that goes through what the official title and publisher will be.
CrazyGirl101 said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 11:10 pm
I absolutely loved with all my heart this story Please write more and tell the public what it's going to be called so we can look it up. Wonderful and it is original and not a ripoff from twilight. Love completely.
Ladywarrior123 SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 1:52 pm
Ladywarrior123 SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s like a novel. With the end ripped out. The edge of a canon. With only one way down.&quot;<br /> -Rascal Flatts (Stand)

View profile
i really loved reading this. please keep working on it im dying to have it continue!!!
DaylightDarkness SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 8:18 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone&#039;s crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn&#039;t he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

View profile
P.S. yes, I know it posted in a huge block in the first chapter, I apologize. Somewhere between my word document and posing on teenink something decided to remove all the tiems I hit enter or tab.
DaylightDarkness SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 8:14 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone&#039;s crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn&#039;t he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

View profile
Just to let everyone know, this is now being edited to see if i can get it published for real... and comments, feedback, what you think i could do better, I'd really appreciate it thanks!
Iridescent_Lilly BRONZE said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 4:43 pm
Iridescent_Lilly BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have many, but my top favorite (at the moment) is;<br /> &quot;Fairytales do not tell children that Dragons exist. Children already know that Dragons exist; Fairytales tell children that Dragons can be killed.&quot;<br /> -G.K. Chesterson

View profile
This is an amazing work. Please, add more to it!
renthead96 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 4:52 pm
renthead96 BRONZE, City, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly.&quot;

View profile
You're a talented writer, and I did enjoy reading this, despite the hype nowadays over cliche vampire novels. However, I liked that you had your own original story. I do strongly suggest that you review this, especially chapter one, because there were many spelling/grammer mistakes. Otherwise, I thought it was well-written, and I look forward to reading more :)
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 10:55 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

View profile
I really liked how you put yor own spin on an overdone overused vampiric subject I was skeptical at first , since the Vampire Academy book's main character is also named Rose. The Volturi , I felt , were maybe in your story a bit too.  You made it your own , anyway. I like your story , it's fresh and new , and your characters are interesting and relatable My only critiscism is that you have alot of spelling errors /typos. Otherwise , I encourage you to write more , you have a great story in your hands.
Iridescent_Lilly BRONZE said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 7:25 pm
Iridescent_Lilly BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have many, but my top favorite (at the moment) is;<br /> &quot;Fairytales do not tell children that Dragons exist. Children already know that Dragons exist; Fairytales tell children that Dragons can be killed.&quot;<br /> -G.K. Chesterson

View profile

Its amazing, add more please!

 

Megan.J.B said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:43 pm
Megan.J.B, Sault Ste Marie, Other
0 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Here&#039;s the real truth. There are eight million people in this city. And those teeming masses exist for the sole purpose of lifting the few exceptional people onto their shoulders. You, me? We&#039;re exceptional.&quot; <br /> - Green Goblin. :)

View profile
This was actually very good! This writing style was very familiar to that of a teenage vampire novel, which is what I hope you were going for. This reminded me a lot of similar vampire books such as house of night and the dark world series! A little cliche, but so are most teenage vampire novels anyways :P Well Done.
Kailey4 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 11:11 pm
Kailey4 BRONZE, Simpsonville, South Carolina
4 articles 3 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;N&eacute; io pitorre&quot; - Michelangelo

View profile
WOW VERY AWESOME!! I want to read more:)
white_chocolate97 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 2:04 pm
white_chocolate97 BRONZE, Singapore, Other
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you&#039;ll land among the stars.

View profile
I like the plot of this story so far. I like how it's not very cliche too. The only thing that you need to work on is the flow of the first chapter. Maybe some paragraphs? Other than that I really really enjoyed it! Great job!!
.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:58 am
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 388 comments
View profile
I knew this story sounded so familiar! I already commented on this awhile ago
DaylightDarkness SILVER said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 6:36 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone&#039;s crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn&#039;t he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

View profile
ok, once and for all- yes, I've looked into that and on my original copy there are multiple paragraphs in teh first chapter, so blame my laptop/teenink. :) the grammar issues, yeah, i know. I'm not the best with grammar. :)
tealbird said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 6:16 pm
I think this has got a really good tone, and I'm SSOOOO glad it doesn't have the cliche, vampire-story feel to it. I don't want to say what's already been said, but I think that the 1st chapter should be divided into paragraphs, just to make it flow better. Other than that, really, really good work!
WritingSpasms said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 9:21 pm
WritingSpasms, Los Angeles, California
0 articles 0 photos 121 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Devils run when a good man goes to war.&quot;<br /> - River Song from Doctor Who (Ep. A Good Man Goes to War)

View profile
This is pretty good. I like how this isn't one of those cliche vampire stories (thank you!). xD The paragraphs may need to be spaced out a bit more. And there are some grammatical errors in the first chapter, but other than that, I have nothing else to point out! Keep writing :)
Artist_of_the_Quill BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 8:14 pm
Artist_of_the_Quill BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Art is like a flower it opens at its own free will.

View profile

It's a really good story. My only critisitim is that there are some grammatical errors and the first chapter seems to only have one paragraph. Please post more of the story soon, I'm dieing to read it!

 

Mystiecub said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:59 pm
that's a really LONG first chapter, it's all i've read so far, but it's a really good story :)
DaylightDarkness SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 2:35 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone&#039;s crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn&#039;t he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

View profile
Thank you Garnet! I find it really entertaining that we picked the same name for our characters though.
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 11:45 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 577 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

View profile
Oh my gosh. I only read the first chapter (sorry!), but I'm totally in love with this story. It doesn't seem like one of those cliche vampire stories, which is really good, because I hate those. I love the style you picked up with the character, although it seemed like you were only more comfortable with the story once it got going. I would recommend separating this into paragraphs, because I find it much easier to read, but other than that, I haven't found a mistake. :) I am going to continue this, I promise, and I may even comment again if I have more to say. I just thought I should tell you what I thought so far. Good job! :)