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The Beautiful and Divided
February 19, 2021
Summary:
Ember is an angel who falls in love with a sarcastic demon. The two know it is not allowed for them to be together, so they figure out a way to get Kai turned into an angel. But when the plan is in action, a wrongfully placed angel puts everyone's lives on the line: including a human girl.
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The Beautiful and Divided
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SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jun. 5 2021 at 9:02 pm
oh, also try reading my friend wolves rains story love rights(vampire and werewolf). its not very long but this reminded me of it.
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jun. 5 2021 at 9:00 pm
shoot didnt mean to post. style choice to make it easier to read I'm going to copy the half comment below so its easier to read, so just ignore it.
haven't read it yet(about to), just want to make a couple comments:
because you don't have multiple chapters I can assume you didn't intend it as an actual book, but you either assumed anything over 1500 words belonged in novel category or figured that it would be better to submit a novel. so there are plenty of short story on ti significantly over 1500 words, I have one that's about 7000(I submitted it both ways). that's one that I measured, I'm sure I have others that are much longer. and you actually don't show up on your account as having novels published(unless you publish it both ways, which if I published novels I would do, I've only done one), and there's a much smaller market for novels. the changes you'll be read as a short story are way higher than as a novel. i didn't check but based on the date and the publishing style of this I assumed you're new(no offense. and of course, just an assumption)
second comment- the title is really intriguing, that's why I clicked it.
haven't read it yet(about to), just want to make a couple comments:
because you don't have multiple chapters I can assume you didn't intend it as an actual book, but you either assumed anything over 1500 words belonged in novel category or figured that it would be better to submit a novel. so there are plenty of short story on ti significantly over 1500 words, I have one that's about 7000(I submitted it both ways). that's one that I measured, I'm sure I have others that are much longer. and you actually don't show up on your account as having novels published(unless you publish it both ways, which if I published novels I would do, I've only done one), and there's a much smaller market for novels. the changes you'll be read as a short story are way higher than as a novel. i didn't check but based on the date and the publishing style of this I assumed you're new(no offense. and of course, just an assumption)
second comment- the title is really intriguing, that's why I clicked it.
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jun. 5 2021 at 8:55 pm
haven't read it yet(about to), just want to make a couple comments:
because you don't have multiple chapters I can assume you didn't intend it as an actual book, but you either assumed anything over 1500 words belonged in novel category or figured that it would be better to
because you don't have multiple chapters I can assume you didn't intend it as an actual book, but you either assumed anything over 1500 words belonged in novel category or figured that it would be better to
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]
constructive criticism- it was kinda contrived. realisticly, they might agree to go on a date, not love. and the certainly wouldn't if it was breaking a massive law. there was also little context, a lot of confusing stuff. but its a good start(start as in, I don't think your finished because the end made no sense, not start in a negative way)