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Infection

June 23, 2011
By Xenodragon56 BRONZE, Colorado Springs, Colorado, Colorado
Xenodragon56 BRONZE, Colorado Springs, Colorado, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
I see some walls... and some ceilings... WAIT!!! Just ONE ceiling...<br /> ~Caboose, Red vs Blue


Summary:

In Titan station, 2510, an unknown horror is about the be released. Something that should not have been awoken. And now it's out. And it won't stop coming. It won't stop killing.


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Odyesseus said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 4:14 pm
Amazing!!!

on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:15 pm
Xenodragon56 BRONZE, Colorado Springs, Colorado, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
I see some walls... and some ceilings... WAIT!!! Just ONE ceiling...<br /> ~Caboose, Red vs Blue

Well, readers, since Infection and Infestation are Fan Fic, I thought I should do a little advertising:

These "novels" are based off of the Dead Space game series. I highly recommend checking both games (Dead Space and Dead Space 2), as well as the animated movie (Dead Space: Downfall) out. *Note, The games are rated M, and the movie is PG-13.*


on Aug. 13 2011 at 10:56 am
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
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&quot;A guy walks up to me and asks &#039;What&#039;s Punk?&#039;. So I kick over a garbage can and say &#039;That&#039;s punk!&#039;. So he kicks over a garbage can and says &#039;That&#039;s Punk&#039;?, and I say &#039;No that&#039;s trendy&#039;!&quot;- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

I dig it! It definitely fits in with the "creepypasta" genre of horror, which I highly recommend you check out!

on Aug. 11 2011 at 4:46 pm
That was well written, creepy, gross, and sad. I'm not a fan of that kind of thing, but i have to say this was really well thought out and written. I could easily see this published as a series of sci-fi horror books.

on Aug. 11 2011 at 11:27 am
Xenodragon56 BRONZE, Colorado Springs, Colorado, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
I see some walls... and some ceilings... WAIT!!! Just ONE ceiling...<br /> ~Caboose, Red vs Blue

Thank you very much.

leafy said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 8:31 am
leafy, City, Other
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Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: I hate it.&nbsp;<br /> Gil: You haven&#039;t even read it yet.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: If it&#039;s bad, I&#039;ll hate it. If it&#039;s good, then I&#039;ll be envious and hate it even more. You don&#039;t want the opinion of another writer.&nbsp;

ok so while they aren't TOO many grammer/spelling errors, a lot of the sentences are fairly short. and i think  the story went by too fast, maybe if it was 15-20 chapters instead of 5, it would've been better so you could've shown more of the romance and his anguish, and not have at least one character die every chapter. and lastly, you need to fix the format of the 1st chapter because you accidentally put the 2nd chapter in the authors not. however, like i said, i didn't catch very many errors and the idea was very creative, if a bit bloody. keep up the work!

on Jun. 25 2011 at 6:41 pm
Xenodragon56 BRONZE, Colorado Springs, Colorado, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
I see some walls... and some ceilings... WAIT!!! Just ONE ceiling...<br /> ~Caboose, Red vs Blue

Thanks... I guess...

on Jun. 25 2011 at 6:38 pm
Jazzy92517 SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
can&#039;t live tomarow till you&#039;ve live today

Amazing story. I never would have thought you to be a writer...