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Black out

November 6, 2019
By Anonymous

I jump out of the car, smelling the saltiness in the air. This is amazing. It’s so great to be back here after so long.  I place my towel down on the damp sand, I take my shoes off and run for the water. The ocean is beautiful, mainly the waves. I start to slowly walk in, causing me to release the stress. The water is cold, I pause. Eventually, I snap out of it and walk further. The waves get more violent as I start to swim. This is getting kind of scary. I hear a loud swoosh. I need to get out of here right now. I look up but it is too late, everything soon goes black. 


The author's comments:

In this piece, I tried to use plot twists and monologues to show the readers my point of view.


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