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Camp

October 31, 2019
By Anonymous

He was talking too much and too loud.
“What’s your favorite food?” he asked Pablo, as we were all trying to sleep. He knew
everyone in his cabin could hear him. The time was 11:48 PM when he realized that he
should stop talking. He quickly noticed that the cabin counselors would report him to the
teachers. When he woke up the next day, and arrived at the dining hall, Mrs. Wilson
started walking over to him.
“Andrew, were you the one talking at midnight in cabin #3?”


The author's comments:

I am working on making my set piece more dramatic. As one can tell, the story’s nature
has the potential to be very dramatic. I like my set piece because my friend got in
trouble. Luckily, he doesn’t go to this school.


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