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Feedback: The Walls Around Me

January 30, 2017
By tati.costa BRONZE, Tyngsboro, Massachusetts
tati.costa BRONZE, Tyngsboro, Massachusetts
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“The walls around me” by, “Allie” is about this girl that’s insecure about herself saying she’s the “blonde”, “not smart” girl. She felt like she was trapped in walls because of all these people bringing her down. She finally felt good and brought that wall down she told her dad , “Dad i’m cutting my hair” , she told him camping was the excuse for cutting her hair because short hair is better. This girl “Allie” wanted to come out of the closet but she didn’t know if she could with everyone around. My reaction is when girls come out of the closet most girls, not all of them usually cut their hair, It’s nice when they cut their hair because they want to express who they are. I can connect to this because I have friends that came out and I still love them no matter who they are and what they do. If someone wants to come out they shouldn’t be afraid of it because they’re their own person.



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