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Knock! Knock!!

March 12, 2015
By ritzzz BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
ritzzz BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
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I am currently sitting in front of my computer scared witless. Every moment could be my last. My friend is here with me and he is the sole reason why my life is in danger.
It all started earlier today when a friends of mine burst into my house and slammed the door behind him. His eyes were wide with fearand he stood there with his back against the door breathing heavily. I asked what happened and he told me this story.:-
He had been living with his Aunt for the last year because his parents were in Mexico. They were doing mission work at a small hospital there.The previous night a beg ragged man had stumbled through the entrance of hospital. He was screaming in Spanish and appeared to be out of mind with terror.
They brought him to a chair and let him sit down. As he caught his breath he told his story in broken English. He claimed that his sister had been killed by something. He kept saying that it was coming for him next.
Confused they asked him who or what it was. With a look of unfathomable fear on his face, he said that it was White Death. She is the soul of a girl who died years ago. She died by her own, alone and unloved. She hated life so much that she wanted to remove all traces of herself from the Earth. She returned from the dead as a vengeful spirit bent on killing on those who knew of her existence.
She is a girl but not a girl he said. She's not dead but not really alive. She has cold, black eyes that weep blood. She walks without actually seeming to move an inch. She stalks her victims like a wild animal. You are never really aware that she is following you until your hear her tell tale knock on your door. "She knocks once for your skin which she'll use to patch up with her own decaying flesh. Twice for your hair which she'll gnash between her teeth. Three times for your bones which she'll crush. Four times for your heart which she'll tear out of your chest. Five times for your teeth which she'll polish and keep it in a box. Six times for your eyes which she'll pluck out one by one. Seven times for your soul which she'll swallow."
The terrified man was certain that this thing had killed his sister. He had tried to tell the police about White Death but they would not listen.
With his head in his hands the frightened man said that White Death follows you forever until you tell someone about it. Then it strikes, kills you, follows the person you told.
My friend's mother and father immediately called his aunt and informed her about this. They asked if she knew about this story but she didn't.
The aunt got a phone call later that night. It was the Mexican police. The parents had been found dead outside the hospital, torn apart.
My friend's aunt called him immediately at school to break the bad and shocking news to him. She told him how the man had given his parents a weird and disturbing story about something called White Death.
It didn't seem real to him, however.
When he got home after school, he found the front door of his AUnt's house open. Inside was a trail of blood leading to the kitchen. There on the kitchen floor he found his aunt's dead body. SHe had been torn limb from limb.
He ran out of the house never looking back until he reached my house.
I could hardly believe what I heard so long. Within a space of day, his mother, father and aunt had been murdered!! I mean how is it possible??! It all seemed too far-stretched.
But before I could utter a word, my friend and I both recoiled in horror as we heard a knocking begin at my front door.
We've been staring at the door for an hour now, neither of us wanting to open it. The knocking is growing louder and louder.
She never gives up....She is unstoppable!!!
I blame my friend. It's all his fault. He should not have told about her.As I sit here, both of us listening to the knocking...I wish a lot of things.
I wish she killed my friend before he reached my house. If he had never been able to tell me about her I wouldn't have been in danger now! I'm sorry I've met him.
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And I'm sorry for you too. I'm sorry I made you read this story. Now that you about White Death, she'll be coming for you next. SO...ALL THE BEST!!!


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Its the first horror piece of mine..So plzz suggest something in comments


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on Mar. 12 2015 at 5:26 pm
Lil_fox_Girl GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes to find the truth, one must move mountains" ~Author Dan Brown

That was very well written, I enjoyed reading it. The only things you could fix would be punctuation and some grammar, but I loved it! :) Keep writing please!!