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The Broken

February 20, 2014
By bayside51 BRONZE, Cumberland, Rhode Island
bayside51 BRONZE, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
you say you love the rain but then you use and umbrella
you say you love the dog but then you back away
you say you love the sun but you hide in the shade
this is why im afraid to have you love me


I woke up to a shrill sound. The sound is ringing loud in my ears. I was sweating so much my sheets were damp. I got up and threw my covers off my bed. As I stood up I realized the shrill sound was the fire alarm. I screamed for my mother and father louder and louder, I got no response. I could only hope they were outside. I quickly ran to the door and felt the handle. The handle was burning hot. I had no other way out. I had to think of a way to get out of my house any way possible. I flung a sheet from my bed out the window as fast as I could and started screaming, I need to get someone’s attention. The sounds of sirens came flooding to my ear I had a small sigh of relief.

“What?” I said

“What?” I repeated. I couldn’t believe anything I had heard. I was broken, broken into a million pieces that couldn’t be put back together. It was devastating. I didn’t know where I would go or when I would be better all I knew was that my mother and father were dead. Dead and I didn’t even get to say goodbye. No I love you, no hugs, no kisses just nothing they are gone now and I didn’t get to say anything.

Years later I’m now 17 and I have a new family. But even though I have a new family I haven’t forgotten my family. I loved them and they were killed by a fire. Whoever created the fire I hope that you didn’t mean to. If you meant to shame on you broke a family and killed their souls. I’m better now but I still have to live with out my parents.



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on Feb. 25 2014 at 6:47 am
bayside51 BRONZE, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
you say you love the rain but then you use and umbrella
you say you love the dog but then you back away
you say you love the sun but you hide in the shade
this is why im afraid to have you love me

Thank You! I enjoy feedback!

on Feb. 24 2014 at 6:08 pm
ElizabethAnneHall BRONZE, Moultrie, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Extraordinary things are always hiding in places people never think to look .

This was touching , good job!