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April 8, 2011
By Tikapeek997 BRONZE, Waterboro, Maine
Tikapeek997 BRONZE, Waterboro, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"good things come in small packages"


I close my eyes and run, not thinking just running. I can hear them behind me. Running faster and faster. I want to stop, I just keep going. I open my eyes and see a thick cloud ahead of me. I try to lose them in there, but they are to fast. I feel large hot hands on my back. I try to run faster, try to get away but I cant. I feel the hands pull me in. I feel something hit me in the head. I see red spots and then its all dark.

I don't know for how long I was out. I wake up in a dark damp room. I see him in front of me

“trying to get away, now that is not what a good girl does” he said. He pulls a long shiny object out of his black jacket pocket. I see what it is, but it is to late. I feel pain in my chest. I see him leave. I fall to the ground. The last thing I see is red, red everywhere.


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AmySeldom said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 4:25 am
AmySeldom, Bonogin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Security is mostly superstition. It does not exist in nature nor do the children of men as a whole experience it. Life is either a daring adventure or it is nothing.&quot;<br /> -Helen Keller

Maybe you could make it longer and explain why and how it happened, but I still really enjoyed it, good description and very suspenseful. :)

on Apr. 25 2011 at 1:45 pm
tikapeek97 BRONZE, Waterboro, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;good things come in small packages&quot; =)

thanks is there anyway I can improve it?

AmySeldom said...
on Apr. 24 2011 at 12:37 am
AmySeldom, Bonogin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Security is mostly superstition. It does not exist in nature nor do the children of men as a whole experience it. Life is either a daring adventure or it is nothing.&quot;<br /> -Helen Keller

short but really good. :)