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D to the A

May 31, 2019
By holidayman09 BRONZE, Sea Ranch Lakes, Florida
holidayman09 BRONZE, Sea Ranch Lakes, Florida
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EXT. ABANDONED AMUSEMENT PARK - NIGHT


Clear sky, full moon, chilly, and raining. Roller coasters stopped at the top of the rides.


JAHSEH ONFROY, 120 year old angel. Half black half

white messy dreads. Soldier of Heaven has the ability to fly high in the air and shoot lethal white lasers at his enemy. He is the best soldier alive. He makes music in his free time and all the other angels love him.


NIPSEY, 76 year old demon fighter, who murdered several

Soldiers of Heaven. He is hiding at an abandoned amusement

Park in Geauga Lake, Ohio, one of the largest abandoned theme parks in the world. He can shoot black poisonous lasers from his eyes and he can fly using his dark magic.He is known for being the most ruthless demon fighter and having no mercy. He has been nicknamed the angel killer.


NIPSEY

(humming while walking around a large abandoned theme park, he looks up at a large roller coaster cart that is stuck at the top of the track. The abandoned theme park seemed very sad and deserted.)

I completed the task sir. They are all dead. This park sure is abandoned.

 

JAHSEH

(flies to the top of the

tallest ride to see out

into the huge amusement

park hoping to find him)

Where could he be? Why did he have to come here?


NIPSEY

(Walks towards a table and grabs an old fake skull and admires it, asks the audience)

Look at this. There’s still some goodies here. This is cool.


JAHSEH

(sees Nipsey and flies down to him, says line

then fires a white lethal laser from his hand at Nipsey)

You can’t hide from me, justice finds everyone.


NIPSEY

(side steps and dodges the laser picks up the skull and throws it at Jahseh.)

You like that? There’s more where that came from.


JAHSEH

(Skull hits Jahseh in the stomach at high speed, he stumbles back and yells and charges towards Nipsey)

You deserve the worst for what you did to my people.


NIPSEY

(shoots lethal laser)

You’re no different from anyone else I have already killed.


JAHSEH

(Grabs stomach yells and flies away)


NIPSEY

(flies after him yelling at him)

DISSOLVE TO:

INT- ABANDONED AMUSEMENT PARK TOP OF AN ABANDONED ROLLER COASTER.


Snowing outside, it’s dark,cold,and windy. Jahseh is laying on the ground clutching his stomach and Nipsey flies to the top after Jahseh.


NIPSEY

(Flies up)

Look at you already giving up, just like the rest of you.


JAHSEH

(Looks at Nipsey with a sad expression)

Why do you kill all those angels?


NIPSEY

(walks toward Jahseh)

It’s my job it’s what I do.


GEKYUME

(A kid who has been climbing the abandoned amusement park ride stands up and is nervous)

Hello? Who are you guys I’m Gekyume. It took me awhile to get up here but the view is great.


NIPSEY

(Sitting down while grabbing stomach.)

Hey Gekyume i’m Nipsey.


GEKYUME

(Looks back at Nipsey)

What happened to the park?


JAHSEH

(Turns back to Nipsey with Gekyume)

He did this get him!

GEKYUME

(Stands between them)

We are not going to fight. There’s a better way to solve this.


JAHSEH

(Frowns while looking at Gekyume)

You’re right, we should not fight. There is a better way to solve this.


NIPSEY

(Looks back at Gekyume.)

We have to fight.

 

(Jahseh and Nipsey both shoot their lasers at each other both fall down dead at the top of the roller coaster)


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece in dramatic writing at school. 


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