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Love is hurt

March 2, 2015
By Lotty BRONZE, Watham, Massachusetts
Lotty BRONZE, Watham, Massachusetts
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Love is hurt

           There is a girl her name is Louise. She is a cute and nice and also a
strong girl. When she was 10 years old at September, 20, her father is
passed away he had a very serious cancer. When she father
passed away he told to Louise “remember very day you most to be
happy, and do something you like to do. Because when you grow up you
will have to faced with a lot of things, in particular, work and friends and love.”
        
         When she 20 years old she want to find a good job to help her mother. She
didn’t want her mother every morning wake up early prepare the breakfast easy.
She thought her mother worked so hard. Louise worked in café, but the
hours and money is not very good. She had two best friends, Cindy and
Anny. Louise was very envious with Cindy and Anny, because they had was a stable job.
Cindy was a famous caricaturist and Anny was a very fashion designers. Louise thought
she very useless and didn’t have a good work.

       Cindy and Anny said “It’s ok! Louise  you’ll find a good job do not give up.”
       Louise said “ but I went to interview several  companies they  didn’t want received me.”
       Cindy said “ Louise no matter what you’ll find a good job. You must to pick yourself up.”
       Both Anny and Cindy said “I agree.” Louise  stop crying ……
       When she came back home her mother was so happy, her
mother said “ Louise you no need to go café to work.”
      
       Then Louise say “ wow why?” then her mother say “Because your auntie hospital need a person who can take care of patient then your auntie thought you can do it so she want me to asked you.” 
      
        Louise said “Of course I want to try it I like this job no matter how hard it is the thing which makes me feel pleasure is helping people. Her mother say “Ok! Tomorrow you can go to hospital to work.

       When she go to hospital to work she thought this work is not really simple, because
there are so many different patient she need to know patient the condition. She
thought she didn’t do so well she was so upset. Then she ran to the top of the hospital
floor to cry. Then some men are working and one guy walking to her say “ Are you ok?
Do you need to help?
        Louise say “I just feel  so bad today because it is my first day to work, but I think I didn’t do will.”
        He say “ this will be the beginning, because you will learn about failure and you also will not give up.
        Louise say “ I felt better know thank you. What is your name?”
        He say “my name is Leo.”
        Louise say “I must to go know see you tomorrow.”
        When Louise back home she thought she lost her phone. Louise use her mother
phone to call her phone. Louise say “hello my name is Louise I lost my phone can you
give it back to me?” And the person say “You are Louise I am Leo tomorrow I give you
back your phone.” And Louise say “See you tomorrow.”
In the morning Louise go to hospital top of the floor to see Leo. She so the saw Leo said
“Thank you give me back my phone.” Leo say “No thank we are a friend if you have any
problem you can call me this is my phone number 5613……” their feeling about each
other nicely cause they are in a relationship with each other and they love each other.
         When they 24 years old they relationship have some problem. Leo want to break
up with Louise and he call Louise say “I have a important thing want to talk to you can
you come to café?” and Louise say “ok! I coming son.” And Louise come to the café say
“What happened Leo.” Leo say “Maybe we can’t get to together sorry Louise.” and
Louise say “You are joking right!” and Leo say “ I am not joking. I am serious.” And
Louise say “can you told me the reason?” Leo say “I can’t told you the reasons, but I was
love you very seriously. If I keep loving you you were get painful, so I choose we broken
up. And Leo leave with Louise.
          When Leo back home he very miss Louise and he very sorry with her, and his
mother say “why don’t you told her you have Amyotrophic Lateral Sclerosis(ALS) like
this she also painful too.”  Leo say “For us this choose is good I don’t want then her get
trouble. Mom please don’t till her.” And her mom say “em…..” Leo was become weaker
and weaker along with the time passes. And Leo mom think must to till Louise, because
they two still love each other. Leo mom go to hospital to find Louise and she saw Louise
Leo mom say “Louise I am Leo mom I have important thing want to till you.” Louise say
“ok!” Mom say “please you must to see Leo know, because he had a ALS his life become
done and he break up with you, because he don’t want to than you feel bother so he
choses break up with you and he also still love you.” And Louise hard Leo mom say this
thing she ran to the Leo house, and she saw Leo body had wires and tubes. She say “Leo
why don’t you tell me l will go with you I love you so much.” Leo say I very sorry.” And
they go with together.
           Until 26 years old Feb,20 Leo pass away Louise mom say “are you ok?” And Louise
I ok, but I feel so hurt I am very miss Leo.” Her mom say “I know just like me when your
father dead I feeling just like you know, but you must to find pleasure from the pain you
must to be strong.” Louise I will try to be happy and I will told the baby say “you also
must to be strong.” Louise thought her love is hurt, but she think just my mom say
things happy things. I think my love have hurt and happiness, because I find the hurt
have happiness. I am very thanks Leo give me beautiful little life. My life will become stronger.


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Love is hurt

           There is a girl her name is Louise. She is a cute and nice and also a
strong girl. When she was 10 years old at September, 20, her father is
passed away he had a very serious cancer. When she father
passed away he told to Louise “remember very day you most to be
happy, and do something you like to do. Because when you grow up you
will have to faced with a lot of things, in particular, work and friends and love.”
        
         When she 20 years old she want to find a good job to help her mother. She
didn’t want her mother every morning wake up early prepare the breakfast easy.
She thought her mother worked so hard. Louise worked in café, but the
hours and money is not very good. She had two best friends, Cindy and
Anny. Louise was very envious with Cindy and Anny, because they had was a stable job.
Cindy was a famous caricaturist and Anny was a very fashion designers. Louise thought
she very useless and didn’t have a good work.

       Cindy and Anny said “It’s ok! Louise  you’ll find a good job do not give up.”
       Louise said “ but I went to interview several  companies they  didn’t want received me.”
       Cindy said “ Louise no matter what you’ll find a good job. You must to pick yourself up.”
       Both Anny and Cindy said “I agree.” Louise  stop crying ……
       When she came back home her mother was so happy, her
mother said “ Louise you no need to go café to work.”
      
       Then Louise say “ wow why?” then her mother say “Because your auntie hospital need a person who can take care of patient then your auntie thought you can do it so she want me to asked you.” 
      
        Louise said “Of course I want to try it I like this job no matter how hard it is the thing which makes me feel pleasure is helping people. Her mother say “Ok! Tomorrow you can go to hospital to work.

       When she go to hospital to work she thought this work is not really simple, because
there are so many different patient she need to know patient the condition. She
thought she didn’t do so well she was so upset. Then she ran to the top of the hospital
floor to cry. Then some men are working and one guy walking to her say “ Are you ok?
Do you need to help?
        Louise say “I just feel  so bad today because it is my first day to work, but I think I didn’t do will.”
        He say “ this will be the beginning, because you will learn about failure and you also will not give up.
        Louise say “ I felt better know thank you. What is your name?”
        He say “my name is Leo.”
        Louise say “I must to go know see you tomorrow.”
        When Louise back home she thought she lost her phone. Louise use her mother
phone to call her phone. Louise say “hello my name is Louise I lost my phone can you
give it back to me?” And the person say “You are Louise I am Leo tomorrow I give you
back your phone.” And Louise say “See you tomorrow.”
In the morning Louise go to hospital top of the floor to see Leo. She so the saw Leo said
“Thank you give me back my phone.” Leo say “No thank we are a friend if you have any
problem you can call me this is my phone number 5613……” their feeling about each
other nicely cause they are in a relationship with each other and they love each other.
         When they 24 years old they relationship have some problem. Leo want to break
up with Louise and he call Louise say “I have a important thing want to talk to you can
you come to café?” and Louise say “ok! I coming son.” And Louise come to the café say
“What happened Leo.” Leo say “Maybe we can’t get to together sorry Louise.” and
Louise say “You are joking right!” and Leo say “ I am not joking. I am serious.” And
Louise say “can you told me the reason?” Leo say “I can’t told you the reasons, but I was
love you very seriously. If I keep loving you you were get painful, so I choose we broken
up. And Leo leave with Louise.
          When Leo back home he very miss Louise and he very sorry with her, and his
mother say “why don’t you told her you have Amyotrophic Lateral Sclerosis(ALS) like
this she also painful too.”  Leo say “For us this choose is good I don’t want then her get
trouble. Mom please don’t till her.” And her mom say “em…..” Leo was become weaker
and weaker along with the time passes. And Leo mom think must to till Louise, because
they two still love each other. Leo mom go to hospital to find Louise and she saw Louise
Leo mom say “Louise I am Leo mom I have important thing want to till you.” Louise say
“ok!” Mom say “please you must to see Leo know, because he had a ALS his life become
done and he break up with you, because he don’t want to than you feel bother so he
choses break up with you and he also still love you.” And Louise hard Leo mom say this
thing she ran to the Leo house, and she saw Leo body had wires and tubes. She say “Leo
why don’t you tell me l will go with you I love you so much.” Leo say I very sorry.” And
they go with together.
           Until 26 years old Feb,20 Leo pass away Louise mom say “are you ok?” And Louise
I ok, but I feel so hurt I am very miss Leo.” Her mom say “I know just like me when your
father dead I feeling just like you know, but you must to find pleasure from the pain you
must to be strong.” Louise I will try to be happy and I will told the baby say “you also
must to be strong.” Louise thought her love is hurt, but she think just my mom say
things happy things. I think my love have hurt and happiness, because I find the hurt
have happiness. I am very thanks Leo give me beautiful little life. My life will become stronger.


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