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The Big One

April 15, 2014
By damian smith BRONZE, Junction City, Kansas
damian smith BRONZE, Junction City, Kansas
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Narrative dialogue submission
Trevor: Okay lets make this quick.
Michael: here it is boys the union depository.
Franklin: how much metal you thinks in there.
Michael: four tons at a minimum.
Trevor: ill be around back with the chopper, frank you be ready with the drill eddy can will help you with the heat when it arrives. Mikey you got the distraction as you know. Okay does everybody understand there role.
Michael: I got it.
Eddy: yes boss.
Franklin: let’s do this.
Michael: Everybody on the ground this is a stick up!
Franklin: I’m starting the drill now
Trevor: I’m prepping the chopper for pick up now.
Eddy: franklins through the wall but we got 5-0 coming down through the tunnel.
Trevor: im lowering the winches now be ready to hook up the gold.
Franklin: im on it the first carts out and hooked up now. The second carts on the way.
Eddy: these guys wont stop coming and im almost out of ammo.
Franklin: second carts hooked.
Trevor: you and eddy jump on the carts and ill lift you out.
Franklin and eddy simultaneously: were on let’s go!!
Michael: one times outside I need cover so I can shake this spot.
Trevor: I’m on it ill have frank and ed come through and give you some covering fire which should give you enough cover so you can get to the chopper.
Eddy: But what about police birds?
Trevor: are you doubting my pilot skills, look at the new guy, I’m the best pilot in LS.
Michael: I’m coming around be ready to do you’re thing they should have no clue you’re here yet so it will be a surprise.
Franklin: I see them!
Eddy: open up!
Michael: you got em good.
Eddy: I know right.
Michael: I’m in lets go.
Trevor: I’m lifting off.
Franklin I cant believe we just hit the union depository.
Michael: never in my life have I done such a perfect lick.
Trevor: I just got word from my connections down south and for all this gold were looking at a little over 20 million each.
Michael: to the big one on three 1..2..3.
All together: the big one!!!!!!!!.



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