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hunted

October 28, 2010
By lancenighting BRONZE, Waterborrow, Maine
lancenighting BRONZE, Waterborrow, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
life sucks then you die


Run! faster! FASTER! RUN FASTER! I was screaming in my head rani poured down on me unforgivingly, but i couldn’t stop,I had No choice.My feet where bare,raw and cold. I was running as fast as i could, but it was not enough,I was being chased through strange unknown woods in the middle of no-where. It was pitch black, rain act like a curtain. I could barley make out the trees in the dense wood. My feet stung from the cold, corse ground. Run just Run! I screamed to my self. I was not the only one in these woods there where six others, 5 of the hunted (like me) and one hunter. He had already shot 3 of us. He kidnaped us and brought here picking us off one by one I’ve been stuck, lost in these woods for days maybe even weeks. I’ve little food and water and almost no sleep,because you sleep to long and you get shot, and thats the end of you. suddenly I heard him. Running behind me, big boots crashing through the under brush. RUN! RUN YOU IDIOT! I screamed in my head stupidly I turned my head back to see him gaining on me. CRACK! I tripped on brach falling face first i tried to scramble to my feet. The hunter neared black hood shadowing his face he raised his bow ready to fire i scrambled to my feet. and took off running,sweat and rain running in my eyes making it even harder to see.But then the crashing of boots stopped, and i heard the Twang! of a bow sting. An arrow wised by grazing my ear. HOLY CR*P!that was really close! i thought to my self,then i heard another twang! of a bow string. This time it hit me in the shoulder.warm blood ran down my shoulder i screamed out in pain I heard a click and the sound of a pistol shattered the silence,almost rippling the air,hitting me in the center of the chest and all went black........

“Alex! wake up!” i shot “ahhhhhhhh!” i looked around my room in a panic. breathing heavy. I looked at my little sister startled.Her eyes widened like.. a mile wide. “was it another vision!” she said voice filled with wonder “I hope not,it was horrible.” “why, what was it?” she said fear creeping into her voice “I was kid napped with six other people by some crazy guy,he stuck us in the woods and hunted us down, shooting us with a bow!” lilly’s face was horrified then she smiled slyly “your making that up,you lier!” Incase you didn’t pick up on it i’m phsycic. “i'm not lying lily, i’m serious!” i said an edge on my voice her face dropped “what ever, come down stairs for breakfast.” she said walking out.I through a clean shirt and jeans and ran down stairs. “Whats for breakfast ma’?” I asked “pancakes,” she looked at the clock “eat fast if you want to make it to the mall.” “cr*p!I totally forgot!” I had to pick up fish I ordered at the pet store i scoffed down two pancakes, and ran to the garage. “By ma! Love ya!” i hollered behind me. i jumped on my bike and peddled as fast as i could down the road when a car pulled out and slammed into it, hitting my head hard and all went black.........



When i woke up there was tape over my mouth, my hands and feet tied. It was dark and small. I froze ice ran down my spine. he hit me purposely! Cold sweat ran down my face, my stomach heaved and lurched...... my vision! I thought in my head, where i was kidnapped by an escapee from the loonie-bin. He was a cannibal, who thought he was possessed by a flesh-eating demon. I shuttered. soooo creepy.

Suddenly the car stopped and the trunk opened...... ohhh god! I thought to my self. A tall man in a black hooded trench coat reached in. i squirmed and wriggled, but it was no use he grabbed my hans and dragged me out of the trunk I hit the ground hard. The wind was nocked right out of me. pain ran through out my back like lying on burning coals. The man grabbed my hands and started dragging me through the woods. It seemed like ours when we stopped. He yanked me to my feet, and hit me in the side of the head with extreme strength and it went black agin......



When i woke up it was early dawn. My head was pounding, it felt like i was hit by a car... wait,i WAS!!!!! “Now,” i said to myself “where am I?”i asked my self. I was in a small clearing with a big boulder in the middle. my wrists had red bands from where the ties cut into my writs. God, I hurt al-over. I started walking around. Hearing birds in the distance, and the smell of pine filled the air.It was almost peaceful, but i know there was a killer out there.



The rest of the day flew by aimlessly wondering the woods till i found a shallow cave to sleep in. Sleep took over fast. The next morning I woke up to bright light in my face, i had the same horrid vision.Then I froze I heard rustling outside, I crept out side to find a woman. her clothes ripped,no shoes,and she seemed tired scared and hungry. I stepped on twig SNAP!!!! the sound broke the silence. She swerved scanning the area with new fear. “Who's there!” she yelled in fear I walked out my hands up. her face was racked with pain as she saw he kidnapped a child to hunt down. “Oh my goodness! Him kidnapping adults is bad, but children, that is horrid.” she said. Then loud foot steps made me jump “RUN!” she yelled I ran towards the woods she stood their giving her self up for me. I ran and ran till i heard a shrill scream and a pistol shot. I kept running, he shot her, he killed her. She gave her life to save me. A wave of pain, sorrow, and hate. I would Never forgive him. He was a monster, a murderer.


Days weeks went by. I was still running, thats all I could do. Night fall came and it started to rain....No! This couldn’t be the vision not now, not yet! CARSH! CRASH! CRASH! the sound of the hunters boots crashing through the woods right behind me.The darkness was so thick you could barley see. RUN! I thought. My shoe caught on a branch and was pulled off,I shook the other one off as well. Running, my feet got scraped on twigs and rocks.Run! faster! FASTER! RUN FASTER! I was screaming in my head rain poured down on me unforgivingly, but i couldn’t stop,I had No choice.My feet where bare,raw and cold. I was running as fast as i could, but it was not enough,I was being chased through strange unknown woods in the middle of no-where. It was pitch black, rain act like a curtain. I could barley make out the trees in the dense wood. My feet stung from the cold, corse ground. Run just Run! I screamed to my self. I was not the only one in these woods there where six others, 5 of the hunted (like me) and one hunter. He had already shot 3 of us. He kidnaped us and brought here picking us off one by one I’ve been stuck, lost in these woods for days maybe even weeks. I’ve little food and water and almost no sleep,because you sleep to long and you get shot, and thats the end of you. suddenly I heard him. Running behind me, big boots crashing through the under brush. RUN! RUN YOU IDIOT! I screamed in my head stupidly I turned my head back to see him gaining on me. CRACK! I tripped on brach falling face first i tried to scramble to my feet. The hunter neared black hood shadowing his face he raised his bow ready to fire i scrambled to my feet. and took off running,sweat and rain running in my eyes making it even harder to see.But then the crashing of boots stopped, and i heard the Twang! of a bow sting. An arrow wised by grazing my ear. HOLY CR*P! that was really close! i thought to my self,then i heard another twang! of a bow string. This time it hit me in the shoulder.warm blood ran down my shoulder i screamed out in pain I heard a click and the sound of a pistol shattered the silence,almost rippling the air, hitting me in the center of the chest and all went black........ my life ran before my eyes every moment, thought,feeling,tear,smile,laugh,Then i faded,falling to death and i saw the light and came to my end..........









Death is quick easy, life is hard painful


The author's comments:
it's kind of strange ...but way cool

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