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Maximum Ride: The Last Chapter

March 28, 2012
By Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss


I stood stiffly, as hot tears leaked out of my eyes. I watched as Ratchet, Kate, and Yasmine were lowered carefully into the ground. A dreary silence hung the air, suffocating us like a thick, white fog. I shed one last tear. I resolved not to cry anymore. I’ve shed enough tears to last a lifetime.
We all took turns saying our final goodbyes. For the first time in as long as I could remember, I saw Fang cry. I then realized just how much they meant to him. He probably felt responsible for them. He tried to talk when it was his turn, but he couldn’t manage to. Then it was my turn to speak.

“Kate, Yasmine, and Ratchet. The saddest thing about all this is that I didn’t know you very well.” I said, remembering Ari’s funeral, and how Fang regretted not knowing him. “I didn’t even like you for most of the time. That was because you were proof that Fang had moved on.” I continue quietly. Fang looks at me with dark, yet understanding eyes. “I realize now that I was stupid. Without you, none of us would be alive. You guys sacrificed yourself to save us, and the rest of the world, whether they deserved it or not. There aren’t words to describe how grateful I am. Yasmine, by detonating that bomb, you may have killed yourself, but you saved the world. Your life was short, but I can tell you were an amazing kid. I’m sorry you died before your time.” I finished sadly, and I stepped back softly.

I looked around at my tear-streaked, bruised, and mangled flock. They were cut, scraped, and bloodied, but I was filled with a fierce gratitude that they were all alive. Life just wasn’t worth living without them.

I smiled at Dylan, who had his arm slung protectively around Maya’s shoulders. I guess he really did end up with “me”. I reached out and hugged Fang, who pulled me into his embrace, and kissed the top of my head.

Nudge lifted her head slowly, and fixed her brown-eyed gaze on mine.

“So what do we do now?” she asked timidly. I thought about it for a second.

“We go back to Colorado. Home.”

Iggy, Angel, Gazzy, Nudge, Fang, Dylan, Star, Holden, and Maya all set their stares on me.

“All of us.” And with that, I ran, and leaped into the air. I snapped my wings out, enjoying the feel of the air on my feathers, and I sped away.

So we could finally just go home.



But of course, my happy peace just had to be interrupted. Like always. I saw a speck flying towards us in the distance, tan wings moving powerfully.

No. It couldn’t be. She…she’s dead! I held the funeral! She died in the explosion with Yasmine and Kate! And she doesn’t have wings! But…there she is…..



It’s Ella.



Flying.

The author's comments:
I wrote this for the Maximum Ride FanFiction contest. In this last chapter, the flock are burying Kate, Ratchet, and Yasmine, a girl that I heard about on a fan website. Max ends up with Fang, and Maya with Dylan. Ella is dead. Or so they think.......

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on Apr. 16 2012 at 10:41 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

h, thnx for letting me use them, ill be sure to give you credit and ill check out your story for sure!

on Apr. 16 2012 at 3:58 pm
StellaDPloom SILVER, Hudson, New Hampshire
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&quot;The road to hell is paved with adverbs.&quot;<br /> ~Stephen King

It's fine, I don't mind as long as there's some credit in there for Dustin & Emmaline since I wrote them. I'll definitely look at your friend's stories, and you can look for my new one that just got approved, Summer Limerence: Prologue & Chapter One :)

on Apr. 12 2012 at 7:41 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo; - Doctor Seuss

oh yeah. any body redaing this: don't take my idea. And Stella, you should check out mu friend SoggyWaffles17 she has really good writing, she also goes to my school and writes stories with me sometimes. Although she just a teensy bit better.......

on Apr. 12 2012 at 7:39 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo; - Doctor Seuss

Your welcome! be sure to check out my new hunger games fanfiction. I'm not done, but it will be soon. i got the idea off yours, i hope you don't mind... i use dustin and marvel, and emmaline, but i swear thats it, its completely different, its if gale goes to the hunger games instead of peeta.......

on Apr. 12 2012 at 3:53 pm
StellaDPloom SILVER, Hudson, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The road to hell is paved with adverbs.&quot;<br /> ~Stephen King

Thanks! That means a ton! :)

on Apr. 11 2012 at 8:42 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo; - Doctor Seuss

I just read both of the stories, and OMG they were Good

on Apr. 11 2012 at 8:00 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo; - Doctor Seuss

Absolutely!

on Apr. 11 2012 at 6:31 pm
StellaDPloom SILVER, Hudson, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The road to hell is paved with adverbs.&quot;<br /> ~Stephen King

I wouldn't change a thing... I'm a huge Maximum Ride fan, and I think that was perfect. I think that how you put Dylan with Maya was good; no waaaayyyyy was he going to get Max. That would be horrible! I was wondering if you'd read my Harry Potter and/or Hunger Games fanfictions? That would be as awesome as this story :)

on Apr. 8 2012 at 8:58 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo; - Doctor Seuss

Thank you HayBale! I am glad that you liked it! Do you think that there is anything I should change? And NOOOO im not going to maked Dylan end up with Max! That would ber horrible!!!! ")

on Apr. 8 2012 at 7:22 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo; - Doctor Seuss

hank you! This is actually a alternate ending for nevermore, th eseventh maxx ride book it hasn't even come out. I wrote this for the fanfiction contest. The one were fang leaves is actualy the fifth one.... but thats alright. I appricate you commemnet and I am glad you liked it! (please excuse all errors in this message. When I post, I don'rt see the words im typing till i push submit)

on Apr. 7 2012 at 8:36 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible.&quot;

Wow! You write really well. The emotions were described perfectly.

I haven't read Maximum Ride in a very long time, so I don't remember all the people that you referred to, but I like your ending better than the one in the book. I hate it when Fang leaves.

Great job!

p.s.-Thank you so much for reading my book. <3


on Apr. 6 2012 at 3:50 pm
StellaDPloom SILVER, Hudson, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The road to hell is paved with adverbs.&quot;<br /> ~Stephen King

This is great! I hope you win the contest, because this is really good!