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Xana is Back

May 27, 2010
By AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)


Two years had passed since Jeremie, Aelita, Yumi, and Ulrich shut down the super computer for good, and life had been very normal at Kadic Academy. Aelita and Jeremie had spent a quiet evening together on the bridge by the factory. The two of them lay spread out, looking up at the stars.

“I have this weird feeling,” said Jeremie, “That we haven’t seen the last of XANA.”

“Oh, Jeremie! You’re just being paranoid. Those days are behind us!” she smiled sweetly, and took his hand.

Laughing good naturedly, she led him into the abandoned factory. Her short pink hair was flying as she ran with him, pressing the button for the old elevator.

“Here, if it makes you feel any better, I’ll prove to you that we have nothing to worry about!” she told him, as the elevator opened, and they walked into the room where the computer screen still lay.

They opened the other door, and got into the control room.

“See?” Aelita said, “The lever is still- oh my goodness!” her eyes widened, and she and Jeremie shared a look of sheer terror.

“I knew it.” He replied, quickly regaining his composure, “XANA is undefeatable.”

“It’s just not possible!” wailed Aelita, “My father, Franz Hopper made sure XANA was destroyed.”

“We have to tell the others- immediately.” Jeremie replied determinedly, a distracted look in his eye.

“I’ll do it.” Aelita offered, running out of the factory, keeping her pace even, panting. Heel, toe, heel toe. She thought.

She arrived at the dorm rooms in record time- she started by bursting into Odd and Ulrich’s shared room.

“Wake up!” she ordered tersely, “We have a huge problem.”

“Five more minutes.” Odd muttered, rolling over in his sleep.

“No waffles for you!” Aelita commented slyly. Odd sat up as straight as a whip.

“Waffles? Where! Hey… It’s midnight! What gives Aelita?” He blinked.

“XANA is back- we need to get back to the factory- right now!” Aelita commanded quietly, reverting to her soft spoken nature.

Suddenly, she noticed something amiss. Both Odd and Ulrich appeared to be statically fizzling out. It had been a long time, and she was a bit out of practice, but she still easily recognized the tell tale signs, “Polymorphic specters.” She muttered under her breath.

She tried to call Yumi on her cell phone, a mechanical voice answered, “Hello?”

Aelita quickly hung up, and clicked her phone shut.

Running now, she headed back to the factory, where Jeremie waited. Panting, she leaned against the wall, wearily, placing her hands on her knees. Jeremie looked at her, probably wondering where the others were.

She uttered only one word before continuing to catch her breath, “Specter.”

“All of them?” he asked morosely.

She nodded. Catching her breath, she elaborated.

“Jeremie. I have to go in and fix this! Who knows where the real Ulrich, Odd, and Yumi are?”

“But you can’t go in alone!” he objected.

“I know. That’s why you’re going to have to go with me.” There was a disagreeable silence between them. Of the five of them, Jeremie was the only one who refused to go to Lyoko- the virtual world they would need to visit through the scanners.

“Aelita- who would man the controls?” he dodged.

“No one has to. We’ll just have to fly solo.” She formed her rebuttal quickly.

“Aelita!” he groaned.

“Jeremie!” she seethed.

“Aelita, it’s just not safe for you to be without someone at the controls, you don’t know what to expect- what if things have changed?” he growled.

“I won’t go in unless you do, too.”

“Fine.” He agreed reluctantly.

Jeremie walked quickly to the computer, while Aelita waited in the scanners. Jeremie started up a delayed virtualization.

“It’s good to be back!” Aelita whispered, as the scanner whirled around her, to take her to the surreal world of another dimension. A world known as Lyoko. The companions landed directly in the forest sector. Nothing had changed since they left it. The trees still stretched endlessly up, on the various platforms floating in midair. Jeremie stared in wonder.


The author's comments:
This is based on the T.V. sereis called Code: Lyoko that went off the air two yeard ago. I hope to bring it back.

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AtomicGrace said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 1:04 pm
AtomicGrace, Luton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'It's Limited edition!' Tony Stark, about a Dora watch!

I love it! Did you know that they've made a season 5 called Code lyoko Evolution now? (It's in live action unfortuntly!)

on Jun. 18 2011 at 10:57 pm
born2bewriting BRONZE, Webster, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The sky's the limit!"

so know what you mean!

on Jun. 18 2011 at 10:56 pm
born2bewriting BRONZE, Webster, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The sky's the limit!"

omg i love code lyoko! ahh why'd they end it??? anyway i enjoyed your fanfic thoroughly.

may your pencil (or pen, whatever you prefer) stay sharp and filled with ink,

Maria


on May. 15 2011 at 4:08 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

Me too!  I have a whole minisereis of these here on Teenink!  Thanks for the feedback!

Thebooknerd said...
on May. 15 2011 at 1:39 pm
Thebooknerd, Lodi, Wisconsin
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This is really good I like how Jermeny finaly gets to go to lyoko.  I loved the series I wish that they would put it back on air.

on Mar. 22 2011 at 7:41 pm
Chaday1911 BRONZE, West Point, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
"Better to have loved, than not have loved at all." Ginuwine

I love it!

on Mar. 21 2011 at 12:43 am
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

I would really love some new feedback if anybody would like to comment on any of my writing.  Thanks! :)

-Aelita


on Mar. 17 2011 at 12:04 am
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

Interesting. I hadn't thought of that... Thanks!  It's not a novel, I just tend to be a bit long-winded.  My actual novel is not on Teenink because it is completely under wraps for the time being.

on Mar. 17 2011 at 12:02 am
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

Interesting. I hadn't thought of that... Thanks!  It's not a novel, I just tend to be a bit long-winded.  My actual novel is not on Teenink because it is completely under wraps for the time being.

on Mar. 16 2011 at 10:44 pm
sparklylittlereddevil SILVER, Jyoyo, Other
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Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere.

Kinda confusing for anyone who hasn't watched the previous series (television series?)

Maybe you should write a short prologue before - just a basic summarization of what happened in the TV series, and an explanazation of the more confusing details.

I like the writing style, but I kinda feel that the pace is a bit too fast. If it was a TV series, then this would be totally normal, but for a novel you sometimes need to slow down and add a bit more space between big events.

...or that's just my humble opinion. Guys out there, please review my book, too. (^v^)v

 


on Nov. 11 2010 at 2:46 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

Episode 3 parts one two and three are online!

on Sep. 25 2010 at 11:19 am
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

There are now 2 episodes completed and online.  A third is on the way, though I can't promise when.

on Sep. 19 2010 at 6:41 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

I'm sorry to say that it isn't coming.  It's just the two parts, I really lost interest in it.

on Sep. 7 2010 at 12:40 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

i've gotta say, i liked trisha better. when is your continuation for trisha gonna come out?

on Aug. 19 2010 at 7:44 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

Hey, "Floorcat!" Your email is broken!  Please call me.

on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:30 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

Hello.  Of course I know who this is.  Just emailed you.  Didn't realize you had already gotten an account, when did you get it?

on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:30 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

Hello.  Of course I know who this is.  Just emailed you.  Didn't realize you had already gotten an account, when did you get it?

XionKeyblade said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 8:21 pm
XionKeyblade, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"You can't come along looking like that, understand? No frowning, no sad face. Okay? This boat runs on happy faces!" - Donald Duck, Kingdom Hearts

This is great! by the way, it's your friend from school, Y'know, "Squirt"?

on Jul. 23 2010 at 4:49 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

THe rest of this story, parts 2-8 are now online!  Please check them out, I'd like feedback!  Also if you like this one please check out some of my other stories on Teenink!

on Jul. 23 2010 at 4:48 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

THe whole story is online now- (parts 2-8) please check them out, I'd love some feedback!