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The Ghost of Sparta

September 13, 2022
By Brandonbr572 BRONZE, Pasadena, Texas
Brandonbr572 BRONZE, Pasadena, Texas
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In the century XI (eleventh) The Spartans existed. They were noble, stronge, brilliant warriors, but especially there was a spartan warrior. He was called “Damaratus”. He was an indomitable beast feared by all. He was the best warrior of all the spartans. He was the spartan leader. When the spartans fought, they were very bloody.

One day the Spartans warriors were in combat against warriors who they were just like the demons. They were known as the vikings. They were stronger and more powerful than spartans. The Spartans warriors were very proud, and they weren’t afraid of anything. Damaratus was fighting against the leader of the vikings that was a bloody battle. The leader of the vikings won. When the leader of vikings was about to kill Damaratus, Damaratus begged his only savior to grant him victory in the battle. Damaratus said “I give you my life in exchange for carrying out the victory of this battle.” Damaratus will carry out the orders of the god of war in exchange  for the victory. The god of war accepted, and he sent two birds from hell that the birds brought two very sharp swords with chains. The swords were like two leaves of burning fire. When the birds arrived with Damaratus, they put the swords on Damaratus’s forearms, and the chains burned his forearms, sealing the promise. Damaratus was suffering as if he was burning in the sun . When the swords were welded on his arms, he took the swords, and he threw the swords towards the head of the leader of the vikings. He cut off the viking’s head, and he got the victory. 

Since that day, Damaratus had been at the orders of the god of war. Until one day, he should complete a mission that Damaratus repented. The mission was to kill his wife and his daughter, and he completed his mission. 

He was not aware of what he did as if someone was controlling him. After Damaratus killed his family, he recovered the conscience, and he realized his mistake. He also realized that he destroyed his village. Since That moment, he discovered that he was wrong, and he regretted giving his life. The bodies of his daughter and  his wife turned to ashes stuck on his skin giving him a white skin like a ghost. Suddenly a red mark appeared on his face.

He was determined to terminate his promise. He knew that the god of war was in Greece, so he traveled there. Damaratus traveled in an old ship, and he departed for Greece. Along the way, the sea was moving very sharply. It seemed that there was a storm, but there wasn’t. Suddenly, something was rising from the sea, and a dragon head came out, then two more heads came out. A hydra came out of the water, but a dragon was not going to stop Damaratus to exact his revenge. Damaratus fought against the dragon, and managed to knock it out. The dragon’s heads fell to the floor of the old ship. Damaratus climbed to the top of the ship and dove for the largest head. Damaratus cut off his head with his mighty swords of fire. The dragon fell into the sea, and Damaratus continued on his way. 

Damaratus looked into the distance and saw Greece. He was closed. He saw that Greece was in ruins. Creatures from hell were fighting against the warriors of Greece. There were a lot of Greek warriors dead, but that would not prevent revenge. Entering the enemies from hell  were some black skeletons and the great mythical beast of Greece that is  the minotaur. Damaratus was fighting with each one of them until arriving against the great mythical beast. When he saw it, the beast was 2.5m tall with a statuesque body like a god and had very large sharp horns. It was like a bull with a humanoid figure.

Damaratus was determined to compete even though the enemy was difficult. The minotaur had enormous strength, but Damaratus had a strength like that of a god. It was an epic fight, but Damaratus ended up victorious. Damaratus ended up burying his swords in the minotaur’s chest, hitting the minotaur’s heart. The minotaur was dead, but Damaratus was hurt. He continued with his determination to kill the god of war.

Damaratus reached the top of a mountain, and saw a great battle in the distance, seeing the god of war in the battle. The god of war was huge. He was bigger than the temple of athena. He was twice as big. He was 16 meters tall. The god of war had long hair that was fire coming out of his head. The god of war realized that Damaratus was watching him from a distance. The god of war took a giant rock, and he threw it to Damaratus,sending Damaratus flying. Damaratus survived, and he realized that he couldn’t kill the god of war with his size. Suddenly The goddess Athena appeared, and she offered him to go to a temple where there was a mythical box called “Pandora’s box”. She told him that the path was difficult because the temple was in motion due to the certainty. The temple was on the back of a titan who was punished for life carring  the temple, and moving in the desert. She said it was worth it since whoever opened the box would get the powers of a god and huge size. 

Damaratus agreed to go to the temple in order to have the necessary power to defeat the god. Athena opened a portal for Damaratus to be in the desert. Damaratus entered the portal. The desert had sand storms, so he couldn’t see anything. Suddenly, ghost mummies came out  of the sand, and faced Damaratus. Damaratus came out the winner. He was fighting with quite a few mummies while looking for the temple. Until finally He found it, but He had to climb to get to the titan’s back. Damaratus took three days to climb.

When Damaratus reached the top, he saw that there was an old man.

The old man was burning bodies. Damaratus approached, and asked him what he was doing. The man answered. The old man was burning the bodies of the man who tried to open the box. The old man advised him not to enter the temple, but Damaratus wanted revenge on the god. The old man told him to be careful because inside the temple there were many labyrinths. If he doesn’t answer correctly, he could die like those men. Damaratus would be willing to take any challenge. He entered the temple, and he walked through several labyrinths. After crossing so many labyrinths, Damaratus finally managed to reach Pandora's box. Damaratus walked over to the box. The box was large and black with a prediction written on the box, but Damaratus didn’t pay attention to it. Damaratus opened the box. came out like cosmic dust and spun around Damaratus. Then he clung to his skin, increasing him in height and giving him the strength of a god. He had grown 16 meters like the god of war. Damaratus was ready to fight against the god of war. When Damaratus arrived at Greece, he saw that the war continued. He saw the god of war.

Damaratus rushed toward the god of war with enormous anger and fury. That was the beginning of the great battle. Damaratus pushed the god of war into a mountain. The god of war fell. Damaratusu drew his swords from him, and threw his swords toward the god. The god drew a huge black sword with streaks of lava blocking Damaratus’s swords. The god stood up suddenly and huge legs appeared like spiders, and the god launched himself against Damaratus. Damaratus blokade the 6 spider legs, but he couldn’t stop the god of war’s sword swing. Damaratus went flying toward the mountain. The god of war was slowly approaching, and Danaratus stood up. Damaratus remembered when the god of war controlled him to kill his family. That made him regain strength and took anger out of him.Damaratus ran against the god of war. The god of war attacked him with his spider legs, but Damaratus dodged the attacks.

While Damaratus dodged the attacks, he cut off the god of war’s legs one by one. The god of war grabbed his sword, and he was going to stab Damaratus. Damaratus put his swords up to block the attack, but his swords went flying into the air. The god of war attacked him again, but Damaratus dodged the attack. Damaratus had taken the god of war’s sword. Damaratus counterattacked. Damaratus buried the sword in the chest of the god of war. The god of war had died in combat, and Damaratus became the new god of war naming him after THE GHOST OF SPARTA.  


The author's comments:

I put several warriors in the story.


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