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The Colors of Love MAG

By Anonymous

Red is the color I turned when Mark Adams first kissed me on the cheek. I said I most certainly did not like him, and he said he could prove I was lying. He knew a special test. By changing colors I failed the test, and he couldn’t stop laughing.

Orange was the color of our fingertips when we finished a family-sized bag of Cheetos. We stayed up all night watching “Star Wars” movies. Mark couldn’t believe I’d never seen a George Lucas film. We didn’t eat popcorn because he had lost his popcorn-popping privileges. He didn’t tell me why; he just said it was a dark day in the Adams household.

Yellow daffodils were pushing up from the ground when he took me to the park, saying we must “celebrate spring.” He brought an enormous red kite, the kind that has a tail with ribbons. As we sat in the grass, he undid the sun-colored ribbon in my brown hair, adding it to the tail of the kite. We ran all around the park to keep our kite flying, the ribbons waving.

Green was the color of Mark’s face after we rode the biggest roller coaster in the amusement park. He’s afraid of them, but he rode it anyway to prove that he was “man enough,” I guess. When the ride was over, he dashed to the nearest trash can, emptying his stomach. So much for manhood. I couldn’t stop laughing. That is, until he said if I didn’t stop, he’d kiss me on the mouth. Barf kiss: gross!

Blue envelopes are tied up with string in a shoebox under my bed. Love letters Mark left in my locker, signed, “Your secret admirer, Mark.” I told him signing his name defeated the purpose of a secret admirer, but he said he didn’t care.

Indigo ink on the palm of his hand where he wrote “I love you.” I kissed his palm, and all of his fingers, before settling on his mouth.

Violet roses I received a week before our anniversary. We never exchanged gifts on that day. He said red ones were overdone. “Besides,” he added, “violet is the color of passion.” He waggled his eyebrows, and I laughed, hitting him lightly on the arm.

The colors of the rainbow are the ties that bring Mark and me together. Growing ever stronger, they portray our love.



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on Jan. 20 2010 at 9:02 pm
Smilie_Kylie_:), Colorful, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.&quot;<br /> -Eleanor Rosevelt

I found that the little bits (like about the almost-barf kiss) added a little more voice to the story. It gave you a feel of the narrator's thoughts a bit more.

on Jan. 20 2010 at 6:44 pm
Ashleykimiko BRONZE, Honolulu, Hawaii
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written through the simplicity of a child. very nice imagery through colors. very nice story about first love! great job!

on Jan. 20 2010 at 4:41 pm
sydney_hope GOLD, Round Rock, Texas
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This is very sweet and well written :) I loved it

on Jan. 20 2010 at 3:35 pm
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells.&quot; From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

this is very touching. It is super sweet and simple. I love it. Write more like this. Very good job.

on Jan. 20 2010 at 2:52 pm
Just_Some_Guy BRONZE, Natick, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Reading is the thing we do to remind us of how much we&#039;ll never know.

It isn't bad.

Some things ("Barf Kisses: YUCK!") are unnecessary and degrade the impression of the piece.

It isn't so much a story as it is a snippet. A micro-fiction to brighten your day. Well done, well done.

on Jan. 20 2010 at 2:10 pm
dancingdaisies GOLD, Westborough, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; you can&#039;t get what you want until you know what you want&quot;-Joe Jackson<br /> &quot;Dancing is like dreaming with your feet!&quot;-Contanze<br /> &quot;Why are you talking about all of these thing you&#039;re getting &amp; nothing about what you already have?&quot;~MMEE!!:)

Oh my gosh it's SSOO SSWWEEEETT!!!! It was funny, too!!(LOL)Iwish i had a boyfriend!!:(

StormyJ said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 9:54 am
That was awesome!!! Your writing is like a whirlwind!!!!!!LOL

dkA.M SILVER said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 1:38 pm
dkA.M SILVER, Vail, Arizona
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I find my self being pulled into a whirlpool of your stories

I am so intrigued by you, which is probably what you want to hear and

I understand it.

But honestly, here is a simile for you,

Your writing is like a rhythmic song lingering around me, it is wonderful.

So thank you very much for putting these words together and making my day brighter. Thank you for letting me know that someone can write as phenomenally as you can.

on Jan. 16 2010 at 12:52 pm
Vanished BRONZE, Change, Colorado
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What does the beautiful audience think? -DEMON Age:17
"Runaway" An excerpt...
Darkness descended until the neon lights reflected elusive colors into the slick shadows of the wet street. Rain slid down my guant features, and I grinned wryly as I played with the strings of my acoustic guitar rhythmically. I tilted my face towards the polluted skies, and leaned the contours of my thin body against the brick wall. The city, empty and barren, shunned my existence.
People, clad in coats meant for the brittle cold, skirted past my hollow guitar case without a sympathetic glance. Figures beneath umbrellas hastened past without revealing their faces. I closed my eyes and wondered vaguely if people without hearts lacked faces.
"I need change," I whispered brokenly. The kind of change that would unmask the facade that people portrayed. The kind of change that would uncover the delusions people harbored. The kind of change that would grant actual change for food, shelter, warmth - without contempt.
My senses had become peculiarly aware since my wandering. I heard the resounding arrival of an enemy common to the nomad. I sighed, and fought the demonic urge to carve a wicked, ironic grin across my face.
My dark indigo irises mirrored sorrow to please the outraged police officer.
"Punk, get the hell off my streets!" He shouted, a pitiful vision of what is known as authority.
He snatched the traditional cardboard sign of the vagrant from the sidewalk, and ripped it until it represented nothing. Scrawled in unattractive black, my words had been, "Just because you look away doesn't mean I'm not here."
"Don't you come back, boy."
"Yes, sir." I snapped a salute, and knit my eyebrows sternly.
He reached for his gun, I suppose, to frighten me.
"I better not see you around here anymore. You got that, you dirty bum?"
"Of course, sir."
My rebellious nature flickered dangerously, and the sense of anarchy burned into my veins greedily. I turned away from the fuming man, and gathered all I had in the world: a ruined guitar case, a guitar, and three dollars.
"Hey!" He yelled as I was sauntering away,"Hey, scum. How the hell old are you?"
I straightened, and lifted my chin. I suppose that my ragged clothes, the dark circles beneath my eyes, the alabaster skin ravaged by the elements, the black hair plastered to my skull by the rain, and the lean state of my body implied that I could not possibly be human.
I growled, and he stumbled back as I hissed defiantly, "I'm seventeen."
He smiled, and leaned back like I had given him a reason to breathe. In a voice like the sewer dripping, he lolled, "That makes you a runaway, boy."
I smiled, my lips curling in a devious way.
"Yes, I suppose it does."
And I ran.

on Dec. 29 2009 at 3:15 pm
so cute i love the story

JHale_44 GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 2:46 pm
JHale_44 GOLD, Roseville, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is a mystery, and a lot of mysteries dont get sloved.&quot;<br /> <br /> - Ivory Tears

Cool story

on Dec. 29 2009 at 7:50 am
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, &#039;I have always thought that but never found the words for it.&#039;&quot; -anonymous

That was soo sweet and fun to read. Great job!

dani09 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2009 at 8:10 pm
dani09 BRONZE, Winchester, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart, and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words

this was so cute...it was an amazing story.

Amour3 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2009 at 7:53 pm
Amour3 BRONZE, Cypress, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never give up.&quot;

Loved it!!! It was cute and it put a smile on my face. :)

on Dec. 7 2009 at 7:21 pm
AnImE_LoVeR54, National, California
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Favorite Quote:
Love Anime!!!<br /> Forever!!!!<br /> I love to read anime books!!!!

I lOvE YoUr StOrY It Is So NiCe AnD GoOd KeEp Up ThE GoOd WoRk!

Book Addict said...
on Dec. 7 2009 at 4:47 pm
I absolutely loved this! It was so sweet!(: I'm totally making this one of my top ten favorites!(=

on Dec. 7 2009 at 3:25 pm
AquariusSunandMoon SILVER, Sublette, Illinois
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This is soooooo good! It's going in my favorites! :D

biddycakes said...
on Dec. 2 2009 at 4:49 pm
biddycakes, Charlotte, North Carolina
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wow! thats really good! i always come back and read this one piece

on Nov. 15 2009 at 7:53 pm
Cute. Mark Adams. Wow. First read that and thought it said Matt. (Bad on my part...someone I know.)

on Nov. 15 2009 at 3:00 pm
giggles38 BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
Come as you are -Kurt Cobain

Omg! This was so sweet. Keep up the good work! i LOVED it!