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The Sun-Dappled Warrior

August 19, 2011
By Adenrav SILVER, Albany, New York
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Adenrav SILVER, Albany, New York
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&quot;War is peace&quot; &quot;Freedom is ls slavery&quot; <br /> -George Orwell

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He stood tall and proud over the body-strewn battlefield. His long brown hair streamed out from the back of his elegantly crafted gold helmet. His peridot-adorned breastplate gleamed with an almost unearthly type of look. He drew his sword from its scabbard with a hiss, not unlike the hissing of an angered snake or the sound a hot pan makes when exposed to the burning cold of water. As for the sword it was not much unlike the scabbard of which it came, ruby-encrusted all down the blade to the carefully crafted hilt. It gleamed like his green eyes, bright and alert. He had sharp features, a forest of stubble marred them slightly. High tan cheekbones accompanied by his deep penetrating green eyes made him look as if a single look could be a deathblow. Even in the darkest nox he shone in some way. He was The Sun-Dappled Warrior.

© Erich A., Grande Prairie, AB, Canada

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I wrote this in a descriptive short story class.
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Adenrav SILVER said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 8:21 pm
Adenrav SILVER, Albany, New York
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;War is peace&quot; &quot;Freedom is ls slavery&quot; <br /> -George Orwell

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thanks! so much
Adenrav SILVER said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 8:20 pm
Adenrav SILVER, Albany, New York
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;War is peace&quot; &quot;Freedom is ls slavery&quot; <br /> -George Orwell

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thanks so much! i written a few other shorts that take place right after this so ill post them soon
Myvoice4change SILVER said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 6:20 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
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&quot;Everything will be ok in the end. If it&#039;s not okay, it&#039;s not the end.&quot;

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Very descriptive, and alot of detail! :) It sounds like the beginning of an exciting tale.
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 1:37 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

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i really like this, its really desciptive and i like the way it written! well done :)
Shawnakat101 GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 9:13 am
Shawnakat101 GOLD, Fremont, Nebraska
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&quot;To be free like a ribbon in the wind&quot; - shawna &quot; Every man dies, but not every man really lives&quot; William Wallace

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I really like this story, it was very intresting ^.^ i hope you begin to write more! :D
SomethingCalledTerra SILVER said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 2:47 pm
SomethingCalledTerra SILVER, Budd Lake, New Jersey
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&quot;Pain is temporary, quitting lasts forever&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> -Lance Armstrong<br /> <br /> -

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This story is great! I would LOVE to see a full story about the "Sun Dappled Warrior" and his achievements
ChocoMint SILVER said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 8:55 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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&quot;Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time.&quot; - Anonymous <br /> <br /> &quot;Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear.&quot; - Anonymous

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This is completely genius!!! And I don't say that to everybody.  The description is amazing.  For a moment I really imagined myself standing in front of him!  Keep up the good work, you have great potential!!!