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November 12, 2010
By MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
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MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

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&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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He crouched there; slightly rocking on the balls of his feet as the wind played with his hair. Listening, waiting. The mist floated up from under the cliffs edge, shimmering in the dawn light. Crisp, cold mountain air took his breath away as he smiled. Only then did he know why he had decided to meet here.
“You should know by now that you can’t sneak up on me.” He said to the silent breath of air behind him. Nothing moved, no noise spoke. Icy cold death seemed to flout off the gun an inch from his neck. It twitched nervously as its owner recovered the shock. “You aren’t like you father … that’s a good thing … that means I won’t kill you.” Cold steal pressed threateningly against the back of his neck, trying to get some ground. Slowly standing he turned to look into Mitch’s fear filled brown eyes. “You don’t and you shouldn’t fallow in your father’s footsteps. This is my one and only warning. Next time we meet I will kill you.” Smiling his sly cocky grin he stepped back off the cliff into to lake below.

© Steve S., Marblehead, MA

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MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 6:09 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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Hunt (Warning Sequel) is out and ready to be read if you wish! :)
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 6:08 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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Hunt (Warning Sequel) is out and ready to be read if you wish! :)
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 6:07 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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Hunt (Warning Sequel) is out and ready to be read if you wish! :)
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 6:07 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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Hunt (Warning Sequel) is out and ready to be read if you wish! :)
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 10:03 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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I was reading though the conversations on here and when we were having this one I didn't realize it but i was talking about 80 views and you were talking about 80 comments, :) shows how bad I am with communication! I wish some of my stuff had 80 comments :)
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 10:02 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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I've written more! :D look for Hunt (Warning Sequel), it's pending at the moment but should be out soon :)
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 4:29 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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Over 100 views!
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 2:54 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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Thanks :) I'm trying to come up with a second part for it
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 5:01 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 577 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

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Wow. I really love the detail in this. My only critique would be to expand on what you have so far, because it goes by really abruptly and I feel like I don't have enough time to really get into the story. Maybe it's just me though. Other than that, this is amazing :)
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 3:27 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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Thanks :) most of my ideas are baced on one character, whether he is named or not, and so most of these ideas will be in his book series :)
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 2:49 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 356 comments

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~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

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Write more!

All your stories are so intriguing ,  they just need to be expanded upon. You do a great job with scenery , and you only have minor spelling errors. Keep it up , your awesome :)

MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 4:15 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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sure :) I'll see what i can come up with
Saysh PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 1:27 pm
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 79 comments

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&quot;Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia.&quot; ~E.L. Doctorow

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omg! write more of this! i need to know more!!! please? lol
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 10:25 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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If he is in the bathroom after you get out of the shower he will rub up against your wet legs and then act like he is going to get into the tub :) cats are so weird and funny (:
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 12:03 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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our old cat drinks from the toilet
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 9:11 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 231 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone.&quot; anonymous

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Oh! i remember those! wow, they really do have a lot of coments!!! :D
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 10:40 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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I know one was Running but the other might have been He Knew but i'm not sure since both have comments that are over a month old so idk
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 10:37 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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earlier today the cat tried to get into the bathroom to drink from the toilet
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:08 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 231 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone.&quot; anonymous

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which one's have gotten 80 comments? i feel like a stalker but i went through all of the work displayed on your profile and i was the first one to comment on everything i comented on, after which you responded and others started commenting, which was incredibly awesome.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 7:06 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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well our cat sometimes acts like a dog and plays dead randomly the dog eats cat food and the kitten follows the old cat